thanks for the chapter and story

love this story, great job!

Ha-ha. I loved it! :)

Good way to keep people interested until the end. I didn't even think of that would be it.

great job

Loved Tony's line of 'I'm not a little kid you can just order around' - did he forget who he was talking to? Great story!

That sucks for tony.

This was incredibly adorable and quite funny! May request that you pleeeeaaaasssseeee write more Tony/Gibbs stories with the whole adoption storyline? Because I just read your "my son" story, and I have to tell you, that had to be the sweetest thing ever, I wanted to cry! I beg you, please write more of this stuff, I love it! :) :)

Tony... :D

Personally though, I love the dentist.

This story always makes me smile.

I'm going to the dentist today... Thank God Gibbs won't be there to see MY theatrics! ;P

Woh, I read yours stories since few hours and it's a great pleasure! Especially because I'm french and I understand yours stories :D

Sincerely, I love very much all of them and I hope I can continue to read it during a long time again! :)

(sorry for my english, like I told you, it's not my native language, not at all!)

It was good; I liked how it was written to make it sound like they were going to NCIS only they ended up at the Dentist instead.

Also I thought you might want to know that you made a spelling/grammatical error in the beginning of the story.

You had written, "...his patients clearly hitting its end." Patients and patience are both words and both sound the same; however, patients is the word that is used as term for the people whom need to be examined by a Medical Doctor, a Dentist, Orthodontist, or any and all other doctors out there; while patience is what one tries to hold on to as they lose their temper or the antonym for impatient.

Impatience is shown when a person is waiting for something and they continue to pace, bounce, or jump; sometimes even lose tempers.

Thank you for your time and this really was a nice story; besides that one mistake it was well written.

Just wanted to say that I love all your NCIS stories :) This one, I think, is probably my favourite. Its so funny and cute! I had a sneaking suspicion it was the big, bad, dentist. :p

I hope to see more NCIS fics from you (Gibbs/Tony father son of course!) :)

Amber

it was a good story thank you

I loved this story. I think more of us feel sometimes reacting like Tony when going to the dentist, at least I do. Don't want bo be taken by Gibbs though...!

Naomi