| Reviews for In the Silence |
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MegaKat chapter 1 . 5/7/2012 "Rei and Duo Maxwell, siblings and hero's among the world population..." Ahem... do I sense a nod to my own story...? _ I laughed my ass off so hard at that, you have no idea! My kids think mommy's gone off the deep end right now. That is so awesome, and if it was a nod to BDC, I thank you for it, that is SO flattering! I'm LOVING this story so far, Lady Xiao, and I really hope you continue it? If not, I understand, but if I can get back into the writing game, I'm sure you can too! ;) |
NoLongerWriting-AbandonedAccou chapter 2 . 4/28/2012 This is off to such a promising start, I really hope your continue this. I remember when you had reviewed my story when I first started writing it, and I always go back and read my reviews and it made me really happy. Your writing style is pretty awesome, but the last time you updated this was in May 2008! So I'm begging you, and hope this will motivate you as well. Update your story, it's off to a great start so don't end it so prematurely by leaving it incomplete. Here are some things to help get you motivated. Read the manga again, it always inspires me. Watch gundam subtitled episodes(Sub always for everything) on Youtube. Reread your favorite gw/sm stories. Reread your own gundam wing/sailor moon stories. Update and hopefully even make new stories. MegaKat is coming back to write her stories, I noticed you loved her story Boys Don't Cry, and I hope that knowledge will help you want to write more. We need writers like you back, so that this category doesn't die c: I hope to hear from you soon c: |
JPandS chapter 2 . 8/9/2010 Wow, i absolutely LOVE this story! I hope you'll continue it soon! Great job so far! |
Venusian Angel chapter 2 . 8/22/2009 hey interesting story so fair I really hope you continue it with the couples if you dont mind me suggesting some would be Minako/Trowa PLEASE HAVE THIS PAIR! They are my fav Rei/Heero Ami/Duo or Quatre Makoto/Wufei or Quatre I am curious as to what the letters say i could prob try to work it out but im too lazy lol so please update and finish the story! |
AutomatedRose chapter 2 . 5/19/2008 Your off to a great start to an awesome story. Keep it up. |
Jess chapter 2 . 5/18/2008 Damn... haha i wanted to try and figure out what the letters meant and lets say i tried so many combinations and i still didn't get it hahahaha! _ Love the story! can't wait for more! |
FluffaWumpkins chapter 2 . 5/17/2008 Muy Bien Chica. I think your writing has gotten better and better each time you update or post a story(which has been many :Hint Hint:). This site has been a real dissapointment lately, and still continues to be, but I think you've managed to brighten the crossover section up a little bit. I love the backgrounds for each character and the fact that you've managed to keep them true to their respective personailities. I also really enjoyed the fact that you didn't put one specific character up on a pedestal and you kind of switch the roles up a little. Normally Mamoru is a little whiny punk and Wufei is a over-egoed mess. In my opinion, I think it was great that you shone them in a new light. |
Darkbadkitty chapter 2 . 5/15/2008 I loved chapter 2, we finally got to meet everyone. I wonder how do they all know each other, and how heero is famous? Please let this be a Rei and Heero Fic. Please update soon! I'm totally hooked! Thank you Darkbadkitty |
suisei no mitsukai chapter 2 . 5/15/2008 I love this story. Mystery addicts me and I especially like how you're utilizing all of the different characters without making the story feel crowded or pushed. Everything still feels very natural and believable and I'm interested to see where the investigation goes and if the kidnapped group is going to learn anything new about their situation. It makes me think of Agatha Christie's And Then There Were None. Keep up all the great work! |
BluLadyK chapter 2 . 5/15/2008 Hm...intriguing. Obviously the man who has them has a severe egotistical dementia, which is supported by the possible religious connotations to the murder of those protecting the nine...but I can sense that you are going to go deeper than that, which is really interesting. I was a little surprised at the complete 180 in Minako's character. When you were writing through her point of view, she sounded shallow and unintelligent, however later, she is able to draw the connections between all of them as famous in their own fields without apparently knowing who most of them are. I'm interested to see how the investigation proceeds and if the posing of the bodies really mean much and lead them to the perpetrator. I'm also interested in seeing if the methods of the letters left at each crime scene pan out to mean anything. When I was studying the anagram, I also looked at the methods of placing them at the scene and there are some interesting connections based on who was abducted and how their letter was left. I can't wait to read the next chapter, till then, ja ne! |
Cris chapter 2 . 5/15/2008 Very intriguing, keep going...I ca;t wait to see what else is in store! |
IceColdTouch chapter 2 . 5/14/2008 Well this is diffently a great start to what could most diffently be an awesome story.I can't wait to read more.I wonder what Heero's reasons for being kinnaped are?And do you have pairs in mind?Please update soon. |
reina shirahime chapter 2 . 5/14/2008 oh my god! an update! its good to really check your email everyday and log in to ffnet...it keeps you in touch with the story...by the way, love the chapter though it kinda reminds me SAW minus the saw and uh...23? Quatre's way too young to be running for president but hey, it's your story..._, btw, what does Heero do? and who is the one capturing them? is it Zechs or is it Treize or is it your own character? _ well, so far so good, update some more, i really like this one...and don't forget to update your other stories too, ne. i'm a sucker reading yours...mwah! |
Rena H.M chapter 2 . 5/13/2008 ohh.. Nice up date. I cant wait to see how this story pans out. |
Nyneve chapter 1 . 5/11/2008 Hm, I must say you have me intrigued so far. I dumped the letters into an anagram generator just for grins, and I did get something, but it doesn't make *that* much sense. Still, I love any story that starts with Setsuna and combines the universes, so this one really appeals to me. I'll definitely keep my eyes open for this one! |