I like this. I like this a lot. A lot a lot. Molto Bene! ;)

I really like this!

Finish the book

This was sooooo good! X3

Awwwwwww :) Love the interlude. It didn't fit in the story itself, but I think it ends it well. Thank you for the lovely story. You're a great writer and it was a joy to read.
esin of sardis

Awwwwwww. That was lovely. I love how you wrote that scene. It was perfect. The ending was perfect. You're right it didn't need the scenes-but I look forward to reading them anyway :)
esin

Oh my word this chapter. Awesome. Love it. The cooking and the snow day and falling in love. I love the way you wrote his forgetting about the detector-really well done and artistic :D
What's going to happen now?! This will be interesting.
esin

Awwwwwwwww. He called her "mum". Love the scene there with Jackie at then end. The scenes between the Doctor and Rose are lovely too. I get his frustration and love how in character you're keeping this. Excellent job :D
esin

Awwww this is so cute. Love the fluff. I needed the fluff tonight :) Drunk!Ten is hysterical xD I love their lives and jobs and everything. :D
esin

Oooooooh this is fun. I really like the idea of this and can't wait to see how it all happens :D
esin

Perfection! Absolute unique and refreshing PERFECTION.

OH MY GOD THIS IS PERFECT I CAN'T.
No, seriously, I just can't even.
I'm sorry. I love this. Thank you. You're beautiful, this is beautiful, this whole damn website is more beautiful because of you. Thank you.

That. Was. FANTASTIC!

There so many parts of this story I like, but I think my favourite parts are with the Doctor and Jackie, just those two bonding makes me grin. Lovely story ]

Loved this, clever and tender and very in character. This idea is a tricky one to write well but you did it justice!