I love this story...it's so sweet and to me is a perfect representation of what making love should be like. I love the descriptive language is this piece as the almost melodic tone of the writing itself. I hope you continue writing things like this! Keep up the good work!

Squeeee! The one was so sweet!

seems fine to me! I really liked this. Sometimes its nice to be mellow and not... you know... handcuffed to bed posts. Anyway, nice work! Good characterization, I didn't notice any OOC stuff, so don't fret. Very nice.

You did it, girl. What a dreamy story, indeed! You're just amazing, I have to say. Bravo...!

I really enjoyed reading your story. Thanks for sharing it. The passion building slowly_all about their love and connecting emotionally as well as physically.

good god you are talented! seriously i have never read anything more HOT on fanficiotn before! you are one of my definate favourites! :D

I really like this story im so faving this.

Hi, I loved your fic. It's really well written. Thanks for it.

Well, if those two had really been going out they probably would act as weird. Keep in mind, two hotheads exposing their love and lust for each other...there's definitly going to be a few weird ooc moments. Great job thought.

I love it! It was sweet and hot and had me on the edge of my chair all the time. I hope you'll do more of it! and yes the hot sex is really really good as well:P

Great couple. I love the rough sex and the descriptions.

Wow, beautiful job, I really loved it!

wow

omg this was one of the better ren/ichi fics ive read crap its better than some of the bleach fics ive read it was soo good and detailed i really liked it

This was great! Especially when they can take their time in what they're doing, not go all wild just in case a Hollow or something showed up. The ending scene was pretty cute as well, Renji holding onto Ichigo...I can just imagine it, and it's so cute! Seemed in character to me...but if they weren't, since they're still tired, I wouldn't care. This's so very well writen and I like it a lot!

Dman, that was slow, sexy, and hot. The pacing was perfect - you really did a great job conveying a half-awake, languid feel. Nicely done!