| Reviews for Clouded Eyes |
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the blanket chapter 13 . 7/14/2009 Poor Kouhei! D: This story was very cute. I almost wish you'd gone more into Sasuke's reintegration into society, though. I imagine you didn't because this piece was more focused on the bond he formed with Kouhei and the relationship he eventually started with Sakura, but I did hope for some Team 7 love, or at least an expansion of the tensions between Sasuke and the rest of the old Rookie 9. I really enjoyed the scene in the park, though - with Shikamaru and Ino. Very nicely done indeed. :) |
alayneni chapter 13 . 6/18/2009 Nice fluffy ending! |
Radjhi chapter 8 . 6/7/2009 wat jitsu did tsunade do on sasuke |
Radjhi chapter 2 . 6/7/2009 i like ur style its not to much you no wat i mean. Its not to romancey or emo its great |
LunaxXmoongoddessXx chapter 13 . 6/5/2009 that was just an awesome story, really it was. so beautiful and a happy ending to. I'm glad i was right to though, at her being pregnant when he proposed, i had a feeling it would be like that and i'm glad i was right. |
galpower chapter 1 . 5/23/2009 Read your story and I liked your stroy plot, nice ideas and you wrote it well :) |
PrincessTsunade12 chapter 13 . 5/20/2009 aww cute but its sad that the other baby died |
kattylin chapter 13 . 5/20/2009 i cant believe you killed the baby (glare) |
sonia chapter 13 . 5/18/2009 Thank you for the story... Four kids in six years..wow! Well, I guess that's how you rebuild a clan hahaha... I also think Uchiha are more male dominant just like you, well, hopefully the next one will be a girl! And men! having Sasuke Uchiha be your dad and four big brothers, that got to be tough!(and overprotective!) Again, thanks for this beautiful story and hope you will write more about this couple. I enjoyed it a lot! |
brownhairedlass chapter 13 . 5/18/2009 WOW! This story has kept me reading nonestop for hours and there were like... 50,0 words. I loved every word of it. SasuSaku forever. |
Xx.Koishii23.xX chapter 13 . 5/18/2009 it was really worth the wait.! wow.! little uchiha's running in the uchiha household.. that's cute.! :D good job.! make more.. make more.! :D |
brownhairedlass chapter 10 . 5/18/2009 No, not Kouhei, h I hope he's alright |
brownhairedlass chapter 7 . 5/18/2009 Are Kakashi and Iruka together or something? I'm a little confused. I find Sasuke rather cute in this story. |
brownhairedlass chapter 6 . 5/18/2009 Kakashi has always been and will always be a priceless character :D I can just picture him visiting Sasuke and then make his teasing jokes about too many babies and lovelife. Great chapter. |
brownhairedlass chapter 5 . 5/18/2009 Nicely written, I love fluff. Finally they kiss. I loved it. |