Reviews for The King's Sorrow
Miss Nemesis chapter 6 . 10/22/2012
DDD: Nooo, Eprooos! Don't get tentacle raaapeed! That's not cooool! D':

I realize how long it's been, buuuut... I so wish there was more of this! D'X
Miss Nemesis chapter 3 . 10/22/2012
XXXD "What about the weird people I lived with before?" Oooooh, lord, I found that halarious! XD
D: Ari, don't run way! You'll get even more hurt!
Then again, Stan was kind of being a little mean.
Yeah, Ari, go back and live with those weird people! :L
Miss Nemesis chapter 2 . 10/22/2012
I hate how Ari is forgotten or not taken into consideration so much. He's my favorite character and he's so adorable and-... Gaah, I just love him! X'3
B-bu- what happened to my little Ari, now? QQ
Whoever/whatever did this to him better be prepared! 'Cause I'll gut them! :l

Anyway, I just started reading this and I already really like it! :D
Gabi chapter 6 . 9/1/2011
PLEASE CONTINUE! I love this story so much! I love Okage soooo much! I also love Epros x Ari! (I also love Stan x Ari, but I love Epros x Ari more! .)PLEASE! YOU MUST CONTINUE! I'm begging you! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEEEE!
Rose chapter 6 . 10/19/2010
I think Ari and Epros belong tougher beside Stan and Rosalyn have An history tougher lol good luck on this one please do keep up the good work!.
Onion Jester chapter 6 . 9/19/2010
LOL This fanfic made my day! It's very cute! And your rhymes are not lame! You write all the characters so well, especially Stan. D

I vote for EprosXAri because it's my favorite pairing. )

Your writing has improved. I know, school gets in the way so much. But take your time! I hope you update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next.
kurohikaru chapter 5 . 12/8/2009
STAN ALL THE WAY!
Lost Wonderland chapter 5 . 6/4/2009
I think Ari should go with Epros for now and then after suffering some kind of hardship, Stan ends up with him. Love the story too by the way. Please write more.
Yami Ryo chapter 5 . 4/8/2009
I think he should go with Epros. I don't think Stan would truly appretiate our dearest Ari. Not unless he goes through a serious emotional or mental epiphany.
sailortintin chapter 5 . 3/27/2009
i vote for epros. there so cute together.
PanDoraBox268 chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
Plz let Ari choose Epros! They are so cute together!
KageTehVamp chapter 5 . 3/25/2009
I agree with Nekkyo-Inu, Ari should end up with Epros! We need more Epros/Ari fics! D: There are tons of Stan/Ari fics out there to keep those fans happy, but I think it's about time Epros got some love!

Also- *thumbs up* Awesome fic! Keep it up!
Nekkyo-Inu chapter 5 . 3/16/2009
I LOVE your wonderful story! It's well written and the plot is engaging. As for your question in the fifth chapter, I want Ari and Epros come together! ;_; I love Epros so much, but all the fanfics with Ari and him, Ari somehow ends up with Stan.

If you could break that chain, I'd call you a hero! XD
laurexine flight chapter 5 . 3/5/2009
with stan...

please make it with stan!

And I do think your writhing style has gotten a little better!

(and please don't take that long to update again!)
delete-me-please-plz-delete chapter 5 . 2/21/2009
I would make him choose... I think at this point he would pick epros. (have him rebel against stan) but somehow in the end he ends up with stan.

here's an idea maybe ari doesn't want them to fight?

can't wait to see what happens next!
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