Are you ever going to complete this

When are you updating

Are you ever going to finish this story?

Also, damn that Booker, no one gets between Sly and Carmelita. SxC forever

I wanted to go ahead and write this as I feel it should be said. At the time of writing this (3/10/2018) it has been just over 5 years since this story was updated. I began reading this about a week ago from the time of this review, and I really got hooked. I wanted to read a good Sly Cooper story and I was very happy to have found this one. I found myself staying up till 2 in the morning some days just reading this story. I was so hooked and I fell in love with the story and the new characters introduced. I really likes Blue and Scarlet's characters, and I was very relieved when they got saved from being killed by Gold. Coal as a villain was amazing. The mystery that surrounded him made him all the better, but he was a badass who striked fear in almost everyone around him. Sly and Carmelita's relationship was very well done, and I for one am rooting for them over her and Dorian. I liked Dorians character a lot and found him to be a real manipulator when it came to trying to get Carmelita to leave Sly. He really loves her, but he wants her to love him more than he wants to be happy it seems, at least in my opinion.

I could go on about how good this story was, and I am very saddened that it was never completed. If the author ever reads this, I hope you understand how great a story this was and how much it was enjoyed. I don;t expect this to ever be finished, it has been dead for many years and will most likely stay that way. This review might never even be seen, but despite that I felt I needed to give my thoughts on what was given. Thank you to the Author and those who helped him/her create this story. For what it was, it was amazing. I just wish we could have had a complete story.

This is by far the Best incomplete sly Cooper fan fiction on this site and if it was finished you can make a case That this is the best sly Cooper fan fiction of all time this story had everything imo

Is it just me or does anyone else see a common flaw in every FanFic post Sly 3 era (when following the main timeline)? If anyone has noticed Carmelita always gets mad at sly and ultimately sad and never says that she would go with him. If anyone has plain the game you'll come to realize especially in the third game that Carmelita wants to spend the rest of her life with Sly so the fact that everyone doesn't even put that factor in and just has her stay and wallow in pain and misery quite frankly pisses me off since supposed sly fans can miss that fatal flaw. She'd tell sly He'd have to take her with if he did wind up stealing again (which he does in case transfers to thieves in time). Don't get me wrong I know she'd be pissed at him but would ultimately make him being her with because of her emotion for him so my only complaint to this story but other then that it's very fucking good.
P.S anyone who thinks I'm hating and being a sly and Carmelita only relationship possibility fanboy bull shit if you play the games or even watch a walk through with no commentary you'll see what I mean

Update please

Would love to see this story finished. Curious to see how everything ends.

Please update the story ... Ive been dying to know what happens. And i cant wait fir the ending.

Love the story

Nooooo i need to see what happens! Closure CLOSURE! Love the story though.

thts a little long don't ya think?

Please tell me this isn't the end.

Please do like a part two! Please!

And I'm just not signed in sorry, but that's my actual username

Dude! I need to read more! I'm already addicted you can't stop now! I don't care if you made this like 5 years ago, do more! PLEASE!