I liked the endingYour story was really amazing loved it allYou need some more editing but there's no such error that stands out so much. Thus, I think its one of the finest and best fanfictions I have ever read

"like other female clients, had turned Watsons head"

WWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

Doctor!

I like this ending!

The idea about that photo is great!

Looks like Holmes is not moving out; all three of them live together. (I was thinking Watson might move out to give them some private spaces, but I like to see them live together)

Just hope the dress for women that time will not hurt Christine too much

Finally, they get kiss!

I just hope Holmes could say something that night

What a bad time to come in and interrupt Christine and Holmes, Doctor!

I feel really sorry for Watson because it seems like he has no idea what is going on between Holmes and Christine

This chapter...I do not know how to say...now I know this story probably would let Holmes and Christine be together (Dr. Watson really should not bring Mary in his conversation with Christine; what a great change to increase affection). However, this chapter looks like some weird love triangle to me , since Holmes cares Watson so much that he even gets angry when Christine does not understand that her action is important and necessary because it saves Watsons life (although I know they are just friends and it is normal to care about your friend; I just cannot control myself to stopping thinking that)

This how important you should learn a foreign language.

Oh. Dr. Waston, you would like to dance with Christine

"like other female clients, Christine turns Watsons head"-WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW-Doctor!

I cannot stop laughing when I read the part that Dr. Watson is deducing seriously on Daniel Adams

Hiding on the roof! What an unusual place to hide! I though Christine hided in the chimney.

I start to hope Dr. Watson could be together with Christine, but the clothes for female in Victorian are the opposite of health.

PS. Christine reads the novel of Sherlock Holmes when she could talk with Dr. Watson! If I was her, I would ask a lot of details of their past cases, or even the timeline.

I can't help but translate Victorian stoicism into sentimentality in my head. Holmes places hand on Watson's shoulder, and Watson graspes it sobbing into each other's arms. Holmes says that Watson is a great friend "He's my best friend, and I love him." Anyways, just reading your story again. It's great.

"It was some after tea"

"I hop you know that I love you"

LOVED IT! Not perfect - pacing needs help, another chapter or two between Christine being nabbed after the ball and before the warehouse scene. More "daily life" stuff, probably near the end. Unlike many books, this one could do with being longer, not shorter. The writing is fine, but, well, the editing sucks. Any editor could correct the things I've noted (and surely some I've missed) but it will take a good editor to whip the author (pun intended) into moving things around and adding material, and a really good editor to notice and look for fixes for things like "how was she out of sight getting her glove, if she could see the glove while standing with H&W? Did the bad guys just happen to be following them?" (I didn't go back to check, but that hit me at some later point. It MIGHT already be explained.)

Is it worth it? I say yes. Obviously the "big main point" (not the plot, which is Lanaghan, etc.) is the romance - but that needs to be DOWNplayed a bit at the beginning, and ramped UP a bit at the end, IMHO. The time machine needs a touch screen rather than a hidden switch and dials. This IS 2007! :-) As with any time travel story, there at least needs to be an internal dialogue of "can I prevent the deaths by showing up BEFORE Lanaghan breaks in my house". IS there a reason there can't be two Christines? Maybe the touchpad "for some reason" only allows certain dates to be set, which prevents duplication? Many questions (as always, and I haven't come back to answer them for me yet...)

[Holmes broke away from the kiss and gazed into Christine's eyes. "How do you feel about beekeeping?"] Sorry, just had to put that in.

Final opinion: This story doesn't deserve to stay sitting on fanfiction. Add to it, get it edited, put your illustrations in it, get a GOOD cover (which your artistic ability will let you do yourself, not have to pay for), and publish it on Amazon. $2.99 for purchase, available on Kindle Unlimited - there's a ton of competition out there, but I guarantee you'll get sales. Especially if there are sequels. Maybe only enough for lunch at Schlotsky's - but MAYBE enough for dinner at Simpsons. :-)

Not familiar with Victorian medicine; did they wait for the bleeding to stop before stitching? I would think that scabbing would interfere with the stitches. Shrug. Minor point.

"A movement from her brought her thoughts" - should be from him?

"I don't I really care"

"The machine 15 seconds"

Hm. Can't see Holmes falling for such an obvious setup. Already know Lanaghan is smart and sneaky, as soon as "it wasn't Wiggins", I knew it was a trap.