ohmygod that was so amazing :O

one of the best things iv ever read!

i do feel bad for Roy though...he loves Ed too. poor Roy :'D

off to read the next part!

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holy $h!t :O that was epic! omg! only 1 chapter left?!

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oh $h!t :O Envys here...now what will Ed do?

and will Envy even be immortal here?

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now Alfons is taken too!? :O
i'll bet he'll be used to make Ed do what they want

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oh! yay! a bottom!Ed lemon OvO
thats cool that you have them being verse in here. most fics just designate a character to either top or bottom.

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awww darn x'D i was hoping Ed would be the submissive one, not Alfons lol

my gosh though :O this fic is incredibl! not only is the story great so far, but THE WRITING! OMG THE WRITING! it seems so professional, its a really nice balance of talking and description, and you make it easy to picture stuff in my head.

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I'm really glad that Alfons isn't going to die. It would have been really sad if he did. I thought it was so sad that he died in the movie. He, Edward, and Alphonse Elric are my favorite characters! I hope Alphonse will be found. I love the pairing Edward and Alfons! They are so cute and adorable together! It's one of my favorite pairings!

I loved this story so much!

I just wonder if Ed would really be so careless about what he says when sober, considering his intelligence and the knowledge of how people could react and interpret his stories. It seems a bit odd that he would endanger them so recklessly.

All I can say is that I loved this story so much I finished it in like 1hr and 30mins :)) Now it's time for the sequel!

I just finished reading this story.
I went the other way around, because I first read Amestris 1917: the equivalent bond. While reading this story, things from 1917 became clearer. I really liked your stories, I think you a very good writer. Now I'm going to start reading your latest story. Thank you for writing and posting this story!

Had to review this chapter. So crazy and full of action and angst! Ahh please be alive Alfons! Ok now I'll continue reading :-D

I swear if any of them do anything to parallel world Mustang, I will hunt every man that had to do with it down and slowly kill them in every painful way possible. Great story by the way!

Aww, finally! I'm glad someone finally made a move. :3

i couldn't look away, kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time i read it. you did an excellent job! can't wait to read the sequel :)

I was sad that it was over...and then there was a sequel. Well, shit. I'm not going to bed tonight.