| Reviews for Take A Breath |
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Helena chapter 3 . 7/19 I think you should have explained the pain of pushing the baby out that's the part that interests me. It wasn't that bad otherwise. |
Kalluvardhan chapter 2 . 7/17 Flora's little sisters name is mielle, not rose this is your fanfic so your do u. Ooo it would good if flora had 2 younger siblings. Rose and mielle btw love this... |
InuyashaFanGirl16 chapter 3 . 5/22 Layla lives in the Kingdom of Androes. I called that fact of Bloom having twins! Brandon has brown eyes right? Then Stella guessed right. I hope for Musa's sake that her daughter doesn't have magenta hair. It would be impossible for Bloom's children not to have blue eyes, seeing as both she and Sky have blue eyes. And I thought for sure that Brandon would follow the screaming. |
InuyashaFanGirl16 chapter 2 . 5/22 Her sister is Miele. Not Rose. |
InuyashaFanGirl16 chapter 1 . 5/22 Damn. Sky. Brandon. Nabu. You are all dead as door nails. I of course expected nothing less from Riven. But Timmy? *shakes head* I expected more from him. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/6 Hello authornim, I have been reading ur winx club stories since i read it, and i love both of them. I have a question though, i have been looking for a winx club story about the winx being pregnant, mainly stella and bloom at 1st. And they nicknamed blooms baby "orange". I could not remember the plot anymore, all i know in the end bloom sacrificed herself to save her friends and family thus resulting for her to be erased from their memories until she finds a way to defeat the evil. There was also a sequel to it, how the winx and specialist feel something is missing in their hearts and they found a secret room and which has 6 areas and they we're wondering who's this bloom. Then Ms. F told them that there is a fairy in earth, there they saw bloom and they saw here looking at a video of them. And they were confused since they dont remember that at all, and they stormed inside here house and ask for questions, bloom told them some stuff and sooner or later the winx remember thus they ran away from the specialist. Also, there wers parts where their future sons/daughters arrived to tell them that they should be with the specialist, also their future selves came to get their children... Im sorry for this long message and not quite related for ur story but i really want to read this story again. And ive been searching for this for almost 5 yrs since i lost it. Again really love ur stories though 3 :) |
Devious Purrloin chapter 8 . 6/25/2018 XD Layla! |
DESIRE chapter 15 . 3/11/2018 I HAVE NOTHING TO EXPLAIN WITH ONLY A ,BELIEVE ARE JUST...JUST...BRILLIANT,YOU KNOW?THIS STORY IS JUST FULLY PERFECT.I JUST CAN NOT EXPLAIN IT WITH ARE A GREAT WRITER.I JUST LOVE FOR THE BEAUTIFULL |
DESIRE chapter 6 . 3/10/2018 I think i look like most as Flora and my behaviours are like Flora really.I LOVE FLORA AND HELIA. |
Sweetness chapter 15 . 12/22/2017 I simply just loved your story..out of all the winx club story's yours is on the to0 of my list.. I JUST LOVE YOU and thank you for a great story (I can't believe it took me this long to find the perfect winx club fanfiction story) AND ONES AGAIN ..I LOVE YOU ... |
Guest chapter 13 . 12/22/2017 Never ever ..never ever ever have i reaf a story this good.. I LOVE YOU... |
Sweetness chapter 10 . 12/22/2017 This great cant wait for the next 1... |
Sweetness chapter 9 . 12/22/2017 I love it ..plzzeee do keep on writing |
Sweetness chapter 8 . 12/22/2017 I loved it ..your chapters are becoming even more interesting..love you |
Sweetness chapter 7 . 12/22/2017 I lovveeeeddd it..yu should start a book |