/crying
IT ENDS THERE NO
I WANT TO SEE HIS REACTION
God poor Ten and Martha and Rose MY BABIES C'MERE FOR A HUG /hugs everyone/
Great fic, great job. You're a wonderful writer. :)

...This story was amazing... I usually hate Martha cause I ship TenxRose and this kinda made me feel bad for her... The globe idea was just so creative and amazing.. You wrote this so well and i could see it being an episode of Doctor Who. That last part with 'The Bad Wolf' Diner really made me all sad xD I really loved this story along with your others!

what even that just freaked me out imagine the Doctors face oh god

Why 'Bad Wolf'? What does that have to do with anything?

You got their personalities right down to the smallest things that wouldn't seem very significant but are important all the same! Bloody (haha, bloody-get it? Sorry, I live in America, FYI) brilliant! I loved it! Perfection! :)

oh! I like what you did with the 'Bad Wolf' thing ]

Wow. You've absolutely become my new favourite writer.

I love how you give this glimpse into the Doctor's psyche and give us an idea as to why he seems so sad much of the time he's with Martha.

Very good. More please!

I loved the story and would love it even more if you continued. The pub being named Bad Wolf and the rift fluctuating... it could be something big.

Very nice, very well-written! You got Martha in-character, and didn't bash her for being a replacement-companion, which so many other people have done. I liked that quite a lot. And the interaction between Rose and the Doctor in the hologram was great! Overall, simply lovely! Cheers~

i liked it. it was really good.

Great writing. Very well done. I think Martha has always wanted to know more about Rose, and know she's had her chance. I like this as a one-shot, but would love to see more if you continue. Again, great job.

Good story. I looking forward to reading more if you decide to add onto it.

Very nice, especially the last tie-in bit at the end with the Bad Wolf. Stamp of approval!

I love one-shots; they're often so much more memorable than full-length ones, and this is no exception! I love the way you've written the relationship between Rose and the Doctor; it's really genuine and completely in character for them. :)