Love it

Cute

soooo cute love it

This is amazing :D If you want please continue it, I would love to read it.

Gimmjow motherhood hilarious

I ship this now.
I came in here all like "oh yeah sure why not i'll see whats up" and then I just
ASDFJKLASJFDASJDLASKJD ITS PERFECT why must you do this to me my shiplist is long enough why you amazing sonuvabitch why

this story was awesome - you should make a second part. if you do will you email me? my email is ! thanksD

SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!

This was lovely. FINALLY. I find a nice, refreshing piece that has Grimmjow in character, and Orihime, being the bubbly girl she is. I really love how you didn't soften Grimmjow down to a bumbling slosh of fluff-ness. He's still the border-line psychopath we all know and love.

Thank heavens for that. There's still some fear, and intimidation and I adore that aspect in your story! Some authors fail to acknowledge that the dude kills with a flick of his finger, and she's a prisoner of war. The touch of hidden angst with Orihime and Ichigo's relationship was deeply appreciated. It gave a nice 3-Dimensional feel to everything.

It also seems believable with the whole conclusion from Grimmjow's observation. "Ichigo's stupid." I love it how you made him say it bluntly and unbiased, truly like an outsider looking in. All in all, a fun, thoughtful story. Keep at it!

loved it ! please write more...er...and could you use a bit less "fuck" there? too much of it

its so sweet! i love that scene where orihime asks grimmjow about those holes... hilarious. XD

great job!

Awww, cute! I loved this so much, Grimmjow is such a cute kitty! Well done!

That was beautiful. Oh goodness, all the fcks and forks in the right places.

You had both characters written beautifully straight down to their tippy-toes, just fantastic-FANTASTIC I tell you.

Humor stories are usually difficult to do... because of the subjective nature of 'humor', but here you've done it immensely well. Which would've been a pity if you hadn't since really. Grimmjow and Orihime as the main stars? Hard not to, ne?

But you have reminded me why these two are such great characters, especially Orihime 'cause that girl's wobbly backbone had me pissed way more times than I care to count. But it seems like she's more neurotic here, and Grimmjow's actions (especially .his. personality type) in this kind of situation... simply Epic [with a capital E].

Ah, this would've been surely an orgasmic multi-chaptered story, but I guess I'll settle for a one-shot (for now).

this is just sweet~! hilarious and adorable at the same time ~ ]

I love it! It was so sweet!