Awww, this was so sad! Nice work.

Simple and short. I like it.

Hello :)
I especially liked the end... It sucks that Fred died :'( it still makes me cry

So good!

this was tear-inducing

Crying so hard.
If every death in every book were written like this, I wouldn't have any tears left in my body.
FRED NO *sobs*

Sad. One of saddest things that ever happend in harry potter books.

Love it so sad rip fred

That was really good. I was literally sobbing omg.

Never has a fanfic made me cry this much... Never... *sobbing*

Me and my friend have nicknames of fred and george, Us who this account belongs to. I know that feeling George shows and you portray it soooooooooo well! It is almost (and i really hope not) as if you have had it happen to you. Thanks a truely great story

I thank I'll cry my self to sleep to night with that story seriously I really thank I mite . It is really good and you should be proud of it. i thank I'll go cry now and maybe try to read a happy story before I go to bead. Truely it's a good story very will dune now I beed you a good night bye bye for now.

Great story, i literally cried like a baby. Ahaha good job tho!

I friggin hate you right now. Kinda. Good word manipulation. You're good at that. And if I owned Harry potter, I'm with you, none of that would have happened.

Congratulations. You made me cry... Which means it's good.