That was beautiful and heartbreaking...I can relate to it so well, reminds me of the object of my affections, how she'll never love me back... *ahem* Anyways, awesome job :3

aw. very cool. i can so see tatsuki thinking something like this. very good.

Wow that was really good you should write more about them

Naw... that made my heart twinge, it was so sad _"

Now you need to go out and write a happy fic, where Orihime realises that Ichigo is a stupid strawberry and her REAL protector has been in front of her the whole time... Heh, or writeanother heartbreaking one. I don't care, as long as you write something. I really like your work :D

Oh yeah and in the show, I was hoping that Urahara would train Tatsuki in time to (help) save Orihime from the Arrancar, but by the looks of the new Opening we're gonna have to be in for another filler arc... *sigh*