This really is a great story. Wish there was more of it!

This is really good please update soon

I seriously want to read more of this! I love how Ed is still present in Pride's mind, i want to know how Envy would react if he found that out! Please update soon. (:

I really wish you'd update this even if it's been 2 and a half years...because this story...it makes me want to cry, and I need that sometimes...

holy crap i almost cried from that so cute

...genius. sheer genius.

EPIC! It's even better than the other chapters ( I think). And I kinda wanted to kill you when you said the 5th chapter would be the last, but... YEA! SEQUEL!

I really need to stop listening to never shout never when I read you stories... It's a good story. I'm gonna read more later. It's about 5am.

aww thats so cute, it makes me want to buy the game . but i can't find it.

I love this story! It's awesome! When will you update it again?

That

Was

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Wow, this is really great. I love it. (Of course, it doesn't hurt that I'm a big Evanescence fan in addition to a FMA fan, after reading the last chapter I had to listen to Breathe No More, it's amazing how you blend the songs in with the story.) I'm a little confused as to whether this is based on the anime or manga, but whatever. It's still wonderful!

I love this story!, please finish it !

Oh my GOSH!

Pride left! Gah!

So where's the last chapter? It's been... 3 months..

:pouts: Pretty please?

that was a sad story, i loved it. when will u be updating it? please say it will be soon