awwwww

Wow! That is a good story. Of course I probably had a different view than when it was written, because i was 3. But It was detailed plain, and just phenomenal, and i know phenomenal. I like how it used excerts from the strip. definitely a good touch. A lot of the fanfics i have read are pretty good, but this one was the creme de la creme, the best of the best. Please continue this series, I enjoy it alot.

this sucks
Jason is waayyyy better as a nerd
that's what makes Jason Jason

This sucks

How does denise look at peter again? Shes blind pal

u suk. i hat tis

It is brilliant! Please finish!

Continue pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeebeee

Please write more! I love Jason and Eileen together! MORE!

Well, thats a refreashing change in Jason Well done.

Now update!

I can see Jason changing a little, but not as much as you described. You don't go from being a super-nerd to a sports star just like that. Other then that it wasn't a bad story.

Hey, nice story. Very unique, writing about a comic book. But the end with Elien and Jackson seemed a bit rushed.

Just wanted to reveiw,

Beia

This is so good I cant wait for more :D

~Mick, AKA Hollywood Grimm

this is really cool and very well written

I love it! It has everything the comics missing- Jason and Paige with people they love! XD LOL