I LOVE THIS

W-what a awsome story ,yet superbly sad.
I hope this brother awakening so to stop his evil twin. Also, I the good twin marry a human as well.
Anyway,please more updates !
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I wish you would continue this story. I really like it, especially the dark side of it. The main characters really came alive at captured my attention.

Oh MAN, I am LOVING the twist this story has taken! I like how you are letting Ci'van evolve into something incredibly scary while assuring himself it's all okay. The detail you're including is incredible! I hope this inspiration wave keeps on going, it would be very saddening to have to wait years for another chapter! :D

HURRAY!

I finally caught up in this story because I went back and read the first one. Now, I'm kind of sad because it hasn't been updated in over a year. Hopefully, you come back.

You are the most talented story teller ever! I couldn't stop reading your predator stories, I am that addicted. Please continue... I would like to know how this will all end and if the twins are gonna find a yautja or human or another species as a mate. I would also like to know if F'gath is gonna find a mate too or if the is gonna die in the story (hopefully he doesn't die). Please update.

*pokepokes* Hey You still need more chapters here. Lol I hope you will come back and continue writing. I want to see where this is going and who is responsible for Her death.)

For the love of all that is holy, I've waited TWO YEARS for this chapter! :D I'm so glad that it's FINALLY here! You sure didn't disappoint me, that's for sure! I can still remember reading the first two stories and falling in love with all of your characters! I'm still devastated over the deaths... :/ ... but I look forward to the new possibilities this story has to offer! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE don't take as long to update as you did for this chapter. :) Great work, here. Truly.

What a fabulous way to end this chapter! Marvelous! :D Please update soon for I can barely hold in my excitment to see what happens next! :D

UPDATE SOON PLEASE! :)

Wow! The way you have portrayed these twins to be, is outstanding! They are so devious yet good... in their own way of course. It is so sad that Vi'can... and El'is is gone... I started to cry when I read that in the last book, but you have a wonderful plot going on here! :)

I can't wait to read for more!

Oh no! Not Vi'can too! No! This chapter was very well written with much detail! :)

Woah... the twins are like... evil! Are they really wanting to kill their own father? Avenge mother? What is that all about?

Well, this is getting so interesting! I can't wait to read more! I'm like... the biggest fan of this, just to let you know. :) lol

*eeeks* what no more? tap tap tap hey wheres more of the story its just getting good! *giggles and bakes a whole tray of cookies to bribe you with* I am excited to see whats gonna happen. You read the books and comics? You gonna put some of Dahalutidi in it too? she was such a great char. well I am rambling I guess. and I am glad you are getting to who shot Her. *sniffles again* I still love that char too. well I love what you did so far and I can't wait for more!

I like how you perceive the yautja, you are doing a good job, and i know what you mean about real life interfering, i have only recently just gotten back into my own fictions.

Keep it up!

Mar.