Ooow Peace Naker i love this youtuber

Good

When are you gonna update the story?

excellent story

I love this story, when is the next chapter coming out

I love this fanfiction, when is the next chapter gonna be out

I love your fanfics, when is the next chapter coming out

I love this story so keep up the good work

you messed up avatar...I thought that zuko could learn the Black flames...but not this...I was hoping that it would be good...but it's not.

i'm sorta confused...

like guns? were there guns?

uh... is this in liek the futurey time?

Snake? SSBB? Alchemists?

Theres too much to follow on. Too many characters to remember...

:/

srry if you don't liek critisizm.

oh and there were spelling and grammer mistakes along the way to this chapter.

otherwise i realllllllly liked the story!

I like the new characters at the begining too!

That was intresting. Then the story sort of started bending in a diffrent direction that didn't really make sense.

Also, Why is everyone in love with Zuko? well besides the guys and Toph.

... Well update soon!

I liked the original concept of the Black Flame. But you added a bunch of bullshit to the story. Your grammar sucks as well.

whiah this capter is blush-a-palooza and yay for the ty luko fluff sorta fluff but never the less fluff

Good job. And it's about time you get back to the Ty Luko fluff. Cute scene.

M...the ending seemed just a bit rush-y and...off-ish, but I LOVE Ty Lee and Zuko in this! I think they were both pretty much in character the entire time, and I could definately picture their conversations in my head as if I were watching the TV series.

But you didn't really give a specific reason why Zuko was at that island, and I think there could've been just a bit more plot and setting detail. Other than that small side step, I think this has awesome potential.

Shit...it's about time you updated. Is Azula gonna die? Can't wait to find out. Update soon and it is an order. )