| Reviews for Embrace |
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TheNovelArtist chapter 1 . 9/14/2019 how stinking cute! I can totally see that for the two of them to love hugging and snuggling and such. |
Deleted Account 23456765432 chapter 1 . 5/11/2015 Awww...sweet side of kyokyo! |
14325643468696786078 chapter 1 . 10/23/2014 CUTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I LOVE IT AND LOVE IT! |
rohor chapter 1 . 12/6/2012 has been a very nice story |
The-little-67-impala chapter 1 . 6/18/2012 love it! |
TwinkleFae chapter 1 . 9/7/2011 How sweet! |
Rainbowed-Sunned-Spirit chapter 1 . 9/1/2011 SO KAWAII! Good job ;) |
CatBru chapter 1 . 3/15/2011 This is the second time I've done a search for the story, and the third time I've read it. (I finally remembered to actually save it as a favorite...) This is with several months between each search, mind you, and it's still as good as the first time I've read it. Its one of the best I've read, with beautiful imagery and wonderful characterization. Thank you very much for writing it. I doubt this will be the last time I'll read it. |
NotTitan213 chapter 1 . 6/22/2010 Wow, this is what I always thought it would be like for the Sohmas, Kyo especially, after the curse was broken. The idea of him craving hugs over kisses really made me happy. I love to draw a lot and I used to have trouble drawing hug scenes, after all you have arms tangled around each other and such, if your not very good, your hugs turn out very sloppy and stiff. So I practiced hug scenes a lot and my 'models' were always Kyo and Tohru, mainly because I imagined that Kyo would make sure that every chance he was given would not go to waste and that he would hug her as often as possible. Besides, I just love drawing those two. My hugs have gotten so much better, to the point that I can confidently draw various 'types' of hugs and though it's silly, I have Takaya Natsuki to thank. This story you wrote here captured in words, what I for monthes have been trying to achieve with mere pictures. In my way of saying, this was beautiful. Thank you for this. I can imagine that hugs would be most special for Kyo out of all the zodiac members because for so long he lived with the one he knew he loved and he had to deal with the though that he could not hold her. With the others it was different. Yuki did not meet Machi until later and so did not miss out quite as for all the others, they each had a sort of embrace with their lover or some one of the sort(Kureno perhaps). The only one I can think of that would be in a similar case would be Ayame who worked with Mine. But I still think Kyo fits this idea better. Well in short this was an amazing story, I loved every bit of it. You do a wonderful job picking the right words for everything and this is such a pleasure to read. Thank you kindly. ~YT |
Becky Sky chapter 1 . 5/25/2010 You just made me melt. I want a boyfriend like Kyon! LOL. But seriously, this was beautiful, and totally makes sense. You characterized beautifully. You deserve more reviews, because this was an awesome story. KYON?TOHRU LOVE! 3 :) |
Mookie 821 chapter 1 . 2/15/2010 I once had a discussion with someone over the intimacy of hugs vs kisses, and how a kiss was the cliche "too personal", but hugs were incredibly intimate. The whole body is involved, and the intimacy is on a completely different plane. This story captures that sentiment. It's poignant without being sappy or angsty - and it's in character. You've written them believably, with incredibly sweetness, and I love the reflection of why Kyo craves that simple human contact (especially from Tohru). Beautifully done and a joy to read. |
manabesgirlfriend chapter 1 . 12/28/2008 I must say... That was one of th greatest kyoru fanfix iv ever read... It's so accurate...:) u perfectly depicted the hug love... I love it. Plz write more? |
Grey's Princess chapter 1 . 12/26/2008 I always thought I was the only sane one who realized the whole "passionate-kiss-T-rated-smutty-stuff" was just absolutely not Kyo and Tohru. You captured this perfectly. Thank you! |
Foxtale3 chapter 1 . 12/13/2008 Aww! What a perfect description of hugs! And Kyo isn't wierd at all about loving hugs over kisses. I am the same way with my bf. _ I loved your description about the awkward hugs b/t Kyo and Kazuma as well. The feeling behind those hugs is perfectly conveyed, and I know exactly what you are talking about. Awesome job! |
701740931248931153753 chapter 1 . 11/11/2008 How absolutely adorable! I was smiling all the way through. It was very much in character, very Kyo. I love the concept. Simple, obvious, yet genius. Very well written, well done! |