It's Ottery St. Catchpole, not Chapel

Now personally I think Jack would come up with the idea of sending Snape to a deatheater meeting with a magical bomb that is time delayed to kill as many deatheater as he can and of course Dumbledore being the passifist he is would not want that.

If you read through Harry Potter you can find lots of plot holes such as how come not even one painting saw a 60 foot long snake roaming the school? How did McGonigal know the Potter's were dead unless dumledor sent hagred to get Harry while he himself blabbed to the whole world?

herre a reveiw please dont send them! lol

yes he loves the simpsons

This relates to my last review. I threw in the bit about the pairings in case you do put character relationships into it. I just wanted to give my opinion on how I personally felt about that subject. Also, I think that the story is good so far. It dose seem like you're focusing on O'Neill's clone a lot during the later chapters. But, who cares? Thats just a couple chapters. I hope you continue this story. IF, you do start a new version, please leave this one posted, because its one of my favorite stories and one of my favorites to read.

I can't wait for this new version your planing on writing. However, please leave this copy online. I really like it, except for maybe one or two minor flaws. Also, please don't have any non-cannon pairings in the new version. Except maybe the O'Neill clone and one of the Harry Potter characters. Just not Ginny or Hermione. Like I said, I can't wait for this new version. I bet it will be great.

I read a story that might help you. The author took the story to a pivital point and then wrote two "optional" stories. As for this story, I think it is REALLY cool. Especially with the connections you have with Sam and Daniel.

dude keep on with this story i am so addicted i cant stop reading it ur good please finish this story. and i realy think ron with a gun would be funney

Are you gonna post a AN for when or if you do a re-write?

BlackRose

Despite the fact that there are things about this story I don't like, If you do rewrite it, don't delete this version. There are a lot of things about it that I like. Sorry if you feel like I'm being a ass. I just needed to voice my opinions

Actually, If you do just one of the things I requested, I won't be offended if you delete my comments

I can't belive you dumped Harry out of the story. As well as the original Jack O'Neill. Unreal. Untill you bring both of them back into tthe story, I refuce to read any chapter posted on here. One other thing, this is just my usual request. Could you find someway to mix in Harry and Ginny's relationship and Ron and Hermione's relationship. If you do these things, I'll remove all of my negitive comments

I don't see why you feel it needs to be restarted. I think it's fine the way it is. Please continue and update soon. it's a really good story so far and I just added it to my alerts.

I really like your story! I hope you continue it, or referb it, although it really does not need it. There were a few typos but nothing a beta could notfix!