I have been reading your stories and really love the ideas and writing especially Savior Aimer and this story. I wish it was finished I'd love to see what happened but it's been four years and I see you had been writing it for 3 years. I just have to say the ideas for these two stories were fantastic, very imaginative and still made so much sense, both of them. I did have to scan a little bit when getting into the characters mind kept going on. I understand the need to show what the character is thinking and what has brought them to the point, but it was lengthy. Other than that these stories were brilliant. I just wish you had finished this one. The characters could be heard so clearly in my mind, you did a great job with how they are and how they speak etc. This made the story even better. Thank you for these wonderful stories. I have enjoyed a few others. I was really enjoying the one where Vala is dead and appears to Daniel but no one else can see her. I would have loved to read the rest but it was a fantastic idea. You have a lot of talent. thanks so much it was a pleasure to read these.

It's daunting that Lexy is only alive, because Adria is allowing it. Not to mention she had access to Lexy's mind while she was so called dead. Could Adria be coming back to repeat their history all over again? We know that as a child Lexy allowed Adria to take over her mind and open the gate to reak havoc on SGC and the entire planet. But what plan does Adria have now and with Lexy? Would the past Daniel and Vala be affected or die again in this future setting? I think this future SGC needs to access again, why the past SGC is there in the first place. Everything that happens seems to have Lexy caught right in the middle. I just hope the others don't leave Daniel and Vala out of Lexy's life right now. I really do think she needs her parents more than ever. :D

I have to go back and see what it the significance of the pendent. It was brutal on how they were trying to save Lexy and Cadman was in Lexy's dream to save her. The pendent did the trick and what power it has over Lexy remains to be seen. :D

Everyone was doing all they could to rescue Lexy. Once the news get back to Vala and Daniel that Lexy died, it's going to be hell to pay. Vala is going to be devestated. But this may change the course of the future of Lexy is dead in this time line. I'm not so sure that this is the finality for the SG1 team. :D

Great Chapter

This is one of your best yet. I love the way Daniel compares Vala with Lexy and her personality. Lexy is always trying to save those she couldn't save in the past. She has the heart to beleive nothing can stop her and yet she is vulnerable in so many ways. She is her parents daughter and her skills for getting into trouble comes from Daniel. But her abilities to risk her life without worrying about her is Vala all the way. I just hope that her sacrifice will not end that her parents end up burying her. :D

Great Chapter

What a breakthrough! Love all of the characterization and thoughtfulness in plot development. It's been an exciting, engaging story so far -can't wait to read the rest of it.

I really do miss this...

The characters and their interactions are really well defined. I love Lexy as her 16 year old self.

The quality of the prose is really good.

I'm glad you're still writing. I dont make enough time to write anymore. Do continue and finish this... I can already imagine the possibilities of what will happen next.

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Great Chapter

As a parent, Vala has a valid point to be angry at the way Lexy seems to have everyone wrapped around her little finger. Vala has every right to be angry and how people seem to dance around her. Cam, being the sensible leader, made a valid suggestion to Daniel in just speaking with his daughter. When the truth finally comes out about Lexy being responsible and why she is so angry with herself. The deaths of her parents had to be horrible to witness. However Adria tortured Daniel and Vala in her time must of been herendous. Daniel had the cure, and just letting her cry out her pain was just what she needed. However I'm still curious as to why she wants to avoid Vala so much. Even when her mother asked her to dial earth, why did Lexy hesitate? Will Vala's meeting with her daughter produce the same results as Daniel? :D

Now we see who was the 112th victim. I feel for Rodney to rekindle that memory of the lost child. Yet with only a few of that knowledge, its still not clear what happened to the Vala and Daniel of Lexy's time. Vala still wants to make that connection to her daughter and it's denied once again. Yet we see what a talented brat Lexy really is. I think she's on her own death wish, and Barrows is finally calling her out on her antics. I think the present SG1 has been protecting her too long. Time for the real parents to put their foot down. :D

I;m glad you still make us wonder, what the heck happened that caused Lexy to be so cold towards her own parents. I think the anotation that there were 112 instead of 111 was a catalyst to her dying, when those deaths were the cause of her innocent manipulation by the Ori. She was a victim just as much as those who died. Vala still wants to be a part of Lexy's life, and I wish Daniel would just let Vala be Vala and let her confront Lexy. I wait for that day. hehehe :D

Well there you back. I was seriously looking back on my own favorites and was wondering what happened to you. Well I'm glad to see that Daniel and Cam saw that Lexy had been hanging onto a tragic mistake for so long. Those people that died because of her had damaged her to beleive that she was the ultimate cause of her parents and innocent deaths. Though confused about the last line where she claims she opened the gate and then stated they died because she did not open the gate is a little confusing. I'm sure you'll clear that up on the next chapter. I was hoping for a little more interaction between Lexy and Vala though. The mother and daughter stubborness. But with all going into battle,what will be the outcome with the knowledge of Lexy being so much the center of the battle. :D

It's about time someone like Dr. Beckett put Lexy in her place. I knew there had to be a reason they let her do what she wants around the future SGC and Atlantis. She's a secret weapon, and that was already acknowledged from the past SG1 and Thor. But Lexy's turned into a little brat, no a big, big brat, and she knows that no one is going to doing anything to stop her from doing what she wants. Finally Sam cam forward to tell them, they have never let Lexy realize who her parents really were. Sheppards been sheilding her as well as the rest as to what happened on that terrible day she lost her parents. Vala from the past is determined to get answers to what happened and let Lexy know they are there for her now. Lexy is passing up a whole new opportunity to get to know and love her parents all over again. What does that child want? :D