As much as I love Lawrence/Adam...oh my god ;A; David.

Thank you so much for writing, absolutely loved the story

Awesome fic! Just enough angst and h/c to make the happy ending all the more savored! (Okay, so I'm a sick, sick person who likes angst, regardless of happy endings. So not the point.)

And the bonus chapter. Ha! You couldn't resist. :p Not that I'm complaining; I was dying just a bit with the what ifs of David/Adam, and that fed my curiosity without upsetting the rest of the story.

You have a wonderful writing style... and- Yes, it's fifteen 'til midnight... I need to be up at five, but, I'm gonna watch Saw now, dagnabbit!

I suppose I should be thanking you, in advance, for the zombie-like state I'll find myself in, tomorrow. And the possible panic attack I'll have, walking to my car in the morning. *le sigh* The things I do to satiate my slash-lust.

I loved the line in chapter 15,

"Adam looked at David as though he was speaking Finnish." Ha ha, I cracked so badly at that. Oh come on now, Finnish isn't THAT hard!

But still.

I loved the story, very realistic. I never liked Diane, but here, here she's great. You made everything so believable, you wrote David as a interesting character, and you made me believe that he actually was there. Which is kinda hard to accomplish. I just wanted more and more. Very good job, indeed. This is one of the best I've read.

Oh, that was great! Adam and Adam #02! The only thing better than that is... Well, Adam and Lawrence. Or maybe Adam, Adam #02, AND Lawrence! OMG! Hotness. But, still. David is so nice to Adam, so I can kind of see why Adam wants to be with him (I know this is AU, but still). Lawrence is nice, but he can be a bit of an asshole sometimes.

SQUE! So CUTE! I wasn't expecting this, even in AU, but it was still HOT, all the same! I hope Lawrence doesn't find out. I have the feeling that he'd be somewhat upset. Poor guy.

OMG! Adam and David! I'm so HAPPY! I know it's AU, but I don't care! The only thing better than this would be a threesome between the three, but you're not that perverted... ARE YOU? XD AW! Adam and David! Two Adams! And they're such good friends, and so in love with each other! Not that Adam doesn't love Lawrence, too, but David is just so NICE, and it's so great that you didn't waste this adorable idea! Thanks a lot! _

AW! I don't support AdamOC unless it's with someone really hot, and David is! YAY! Plus, I know that Adam always goes back to Lawrence, and that's what matters in the end! _

Anyway, CUTE! Sorry I haven't reviewed in forever, I've been away... But I come back to find this baby ending! ARGH! I almost cried! I'm going to miss your writing so much... I'm happy to know that you'll probably write ChainShipping in the future, but still... Anyway, these last chapters were so cute! I love how Adam bonds with Diana in his own gruff little way... I wish he was my dad. I'd have a disturbing relationship with him, but no one's perfect. XD I'll be sure to put you on my author alert-list! Take care!

Whoa.

I think that song fits so well with Adam and David.

Wonderful job, I loved it!

You are amazing! ;)

I'm so sorry that I haven't reviewed before. I hope you can forgive me! I finally found time to catch up with this story, and oh my gosh, it was ADORABLE! Adam was so damn cute throughout the whole thing! You are a FANTASTIC writer!

I loved the relationship between Adam and David. They were so funny together, and David was such a sweet friend! (and one of the best OC's!) :D

Aw, and I'm just so glad that everything worked out between Lawrence and Adam (and that Adam was okay after his stroke! I felt SO bad for him!).

I'm going to miss this story. I loved it from beginning to end, which by the way, was SO CUTE with Diana!

Cute and angsty and wonderful!

This was a lovely little treat.

Very well done!

David is a doll.

ADORABLE!

Oh, I am going to miss this fic so much!

I am so happy everything worked out between Lawrence and Adam..

Of course, we all knew it would.

Can't wait till your next one!

You are AMAZING.

Aw! What a cute epilogue! It's not wonder that Diana had a crush on David, but if I were her, I'd have a crush on Adam, too. Not Lawrence, though. I mean, he's hot, but incest is still worrying, so... XD Anyway, I love how the three of them ( Diana, whom I'm not overly fond of in general, but who seemed okay here) were sitting together. If I was more perverted, I'd have suggested a three-man-thing of some kind, but that probably would have ruined the story. Heh. I'm not THAT perverted.

Great work on this fic, TV. I'll be reading that surprise (BONUS!) thing tomorrow, though, since I'm exhausted out of my wits right now. It has a very interesting name. XD

Oh, it makes me so sad that this has ended!

You really are an incredable writer.

This story is by-far one of the best I have read.

I can't wait for a new fic from you, I bet it will be just as fantastic!

I must admit though, I think a little fling with David should be in order..

But Adam ALWAYS ends up with Lawrence!

As it should be.

Those to belong together.

Epilogue, here I come!

Oh, no! This fic has ended... I'm so annoyed! But at least it ended well, with Adam and Lawrence happy! But I was annoyed at how David seemed to want to be with his girlfriend over Adam. Is he out of his mind? Well, he'll come around, I'm sure. Who wouldn't love Adam? He's so adorable! Plus, he earns $13 an hour now! Who could resist him? XD

OH! CUTE! So cute and final. Adam and his pauses. That's just his excuse to mess with grammar the way he does! But I love how he "persuades" Lawrence at the end, though. Lawrence shouldn't have not wanted to do things with him, but I guess he was tired. Ah, well. Now he and Adam will be happy together, especially since Adam is earning more money. Whoever promoted him must have realized how hot he was!