ffs finish please for the love of god

I know it's been a long time, but I would still love to see this one get finished. Bobby's going to be pissed but I'm sure he will find a way to help Dean.

I'm heeeerrrreeee... :) You're made of pure awesome, did you know that? You've got the right amount of snark and suspense for a SPN fic and Sam and Dean are on point. The what-the-hell factor that keeps you questioning things every episode is present, along with the sense of family highs and lows. And your style is glorious as always! In particular, I loved the chapter from Bobby's POV, and all the references you throw in when least expected. Consider me on the hook and ready for more!

No! Noooooo! I'm at the end and you haven't updated in ages! No. This just isn't possible! Lovely story. Loved the chapter. I'll be anxiously awaiting an update! xoxo BDA

Aw. Dean's got a journal. Totally adorable. I always wondered why the SPN writers never put that in. Dad's journal is such an important thing to them. It's like they're still young boys, learning to be hunters as opposed to being hunters. Loved this chapter. Just loved it.

Oh man. This was terrific. I love Bobby dearly. And his assessment of the boys is just spot on. I love how you captured the mood of the salvage yard & the relationship of this odd family who fights the evil of the world with love & lore as their weapons. I'm in love.

OMG mobbed by Swedish supermodels? Abominable Douchebag? I'm dying laughing at the brothers' interactions. Well done, girl.

A little schizophrenic here, bouncing around storylines but the imagery is unparalleled. I was right there in the mill with the boys, on that creepy beach with Dean. You do such a good job at writing the mood. The fear. Very evocative. Bravo.

GREAT chapter. Well layed out. Sammy's vision is amazingly detailed and graphic. Love it. BDA

OMG Dean's snark? The whiplash between funny and serious and back to funny in the first section? Awesome (non-Dean voice)! You've got an exta period before "Look man" in the second section. And again, you nailed Bobby, plus the "I've got work to do" lines; perfection. Now I really want to know what the MOTW is did to Dean. Great plot line. Simply fabulous.

Hmmm. Saw I missed this one. I-90 to the US52. So...they're headed for Guttenburg, Iowa, coming out of ... Rochester? See? I'm a freak, more Sam than Dean unfortunately. I've got my map out trying to figure out where they are coming from and where they are headed to. Okay, the story. Dean's dying is wonderfully written. And the monster? Freakin' rad! Uber-crap? Hilarious. Nicely done!

Missing a quotation mark at the very end of the first section before 'get in there'. Sammy's first flashback -the one about Dean-was a little abrupt and I was lost for a second. You freakin' nailed Bobby. He's perfection. The rest of the chapter? Beautifully written. Smart, snappy, good horror. And I love that you fling the boys around as much as the show does. Whatever this evil SOB is, it's manifesting more; Sammy saw secondary evidence this time. Are we going to hear some Zep at some point? Or Motorhead? Or even better, AC/DC? Love Dean's taste in music; he's the best. PS I had to turn Provenance back on just to hear him say 'Jared'. LOL

Mmm. Nice descriptions of sound & smell here; the horror is very nicely done. Not too sure of the use of 'gnarly' - it's not canon, but that's just me. I would dearly love to see you use the word 'gank' at some point - one of my favorite all-time words going back to the 90's, way before SPN (God bless the Kripkeeper). Again, you've captured the voice of the boys very well here; their arguments are perfect. I like where the story is leading us, just like the plot of the shows themselves where you never quite know what is going to happen. Me likey. A lot.

You know, now that I think about it... Did I spy Sam Gibson from Y&R on the TV in the last chapter? It would fit the time frame-ish and you did mention Genoa. God, I'm a geek. Worse the Sammy. Oh. And Silence of the Lambs, Hannibal Lecter. Or Ghost Busters. You reference both movies. LOL As to the chapter, very well written horror. It's scary and I love where you are taking the visions our poor Dean is having. Loved the French fries and salt reference too.

Again, well written. Saw a couple of typos. One where you first mention Chicago, the other "when the truth was all to clear to Sam": Two o's. I like the interaction between the boys. And the back story. Lots of acumen here about their personalities. Even better, did I spy Eric Brady from Days on the TV? Bravo