I find it funny that only after this long until someone finally found out about the manga and the anime

ALRIGHT! WHO THE (beep!) LET LIGHT YAGAMI NEAR THE AKATSUKI!

ROFLMAO! That was epic! XD While I was reading I kept thinking "Oy, some one should animate this!" That would be the kind of funny that chokes you because you can't stop laughing!

-looks at the end- Well if that isn't my luck I don't know what is.

You keep a diary...err journal?

(pulls out orochimarus tounge and starts strangling him with it).

Don't you ever threaten to kill my best friend ever again or I'll actualy write that story involving a certen giant radioactive DaiKaiju stomping the leaf, sand, and sound villages to nothing but worthless waistlands.

NaruHina is so adourable.

(grabs Naruto by the shirt and shakes him like a martinii).

Don't ever say that my friend sucks or I'll pop you like a zit.

I didn't see that coming.

Well, I guess I shall favorite/alert this considering my Humormeter has been broken by over use... which is very rare (the humor part, not the favorites part... though, I might want to go through my list and remove those that I have fallen out of interest with), considering I don't laugh much.

Anyways, this is quite an interesting piece you have been working on, and to think that I have been skipping over is just because it doesn't follow my usual norm (mostly serious, but with some humor thrown along the way). I have to say, though, it is rather good. It does certainly beat some of the other horrendous works out there (that some how stay alive, even though the majority of the population just wish for their inevitable demise to happen immediately), but I digress.

Now, your characters are creepily in character, and even with their story submissions, they just sound like something the characters would write (or not write, in Shikamaru's case... which I love you for). Each character's optimistic beliefs... and many illogical insight (such as Naruto's and Ino's, which are quite good - at least in Ino's case, I can safely say that Naruto's is trash, and he need to led away from the keyboard before he hurts someones brain... such as mine - but you know that already, you wrote them that way intentionally.)

In any case, I love what you have written, and I shall read up the rest of the "story" as soon as I can, and give my suggestions or inquiry whenever I see fit. Once again, I loved the Shikamaru part, and by far, the most humorous segment so far. Hope the rest of the story is just as good.

'til I later respond (or you, depending on if you are the type of person who actually takes the time to send a responce to a responce, or not),

- CalculusNova 微積分新星

It was a good update, can't wait for the next one! It's really funny, and I hope you get back into the 'swing of things' as soon as possible!

LOLs, Is Sasuke working for Akatsuki in this story? If so, I would guess he's trying to make Naruto angry enough for him to release Kyuubi...and to get Sakura to either kill Ino, or become suicidal. Update soon!

Ack! I almost forgot to review this story! I feel so bad for Kiba and Choji and I can actually sympathize for them! CURSE YOU WRITER'S BLOCK! BURN IN HELL!

~Rafiki Kenobi

awesome but short.

lol, Sasuke's really funny with those things in the diary, and I hope Neko-san gets through with the plan!

nice

It was short but pretty good. I hope this chapter got you thinking about the story and you'll update soon.