| Reviews for Blood Trust |
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jocyzl chapter 1 . 12/23/2014 Please continue with this story I wish to read mpre its so interesting |
Guest chapter 8 . 6/8/2013 Please update! I love the story, please continue! |
SessKags chapter 8 . 8/1/2010 PLEASE update even though it's been almost 2 years. |
Hellspanda chapter 8 . 6/14/2010 this a very good plot line and I love the refrence pic from ROo, I ca't wait to see what you do with it :D |
Hatter Coon chapter 8 . 8/16/2009 please finish this! |
ichigohaatsu chapter 8 . 2/12/2009 update soon |
Incomprehensible chapter 8 . 11/22/2008 Awwh. Who wouldn't be awake all night in Sesshoumaru's bed? Especially when he's not-so-happy with you. That would really suck. I really like the story so far - I would have reviewed at an earlier date, but there was something wrong with my computer (or maybe the site) and it wouldn't allow me to, so I'm doing it now. Yay! I love how you've got her turned into a demon when they do the youki exchange thing, that wasn't something I predicted happening, but it's kinda cool. I'm an eternal fan to you because you didn't use the: "Kagome saw Inuyasha and Kikyou in the woods and ran away only to bump into Sesshoumaru", or "Rin is sick. Sesshoumaru goes to get Kagome" plots. Points to you. I've been looking for things that I could comment on that might help you to improve, and I've only got two, but they're very basic: description, and italics. I don't necessarily mean description in the way of going into detail when it comes to every little aspect, but maybe emotionally and physically. I've noticed how you, and many other writers, use capitals instead of italics to get your point across. I, personally, find it unprofessional, 'cause honestly, how many books have you read that use capital letters to get ideas and points across? But then again, the choice is up to you. That's pretty much all I have to say, though. It's a really good read, I'm glad I took the time to. ~ Incomprehensible |
angelapage chapter 8 . 11/8/2008 Great fanfic, keep up the great work. |
xXShadowedfateXx chapter 8 . 10/21/2008 lol. Poor Kagome, I can't believe that happened. I thought it would go back to Sesshomaru and cause some crazy war or something, but I didn't expect that to happen. assasins poor Kaggers I don't think she's gonna sleep, I'd be paranoid as well, though. |
ShadowDog34 chapter 8 . 10/18/2008 This is bloody brilliant! Very original also. |
merlyn1382 chapter 8 . 10/18/2008 poor kags but at least she will get that demon |
Wings of Tears chapter 8 . 10/18/2008 SOUNDS GOOD! PLEASE Please Please update soon! |
doctorwhofan5556 chapter 8 . 10/18/2008 Great chapter! Please update soon! |
sweetmoonfairy chapter 8 . 10/18/2008 I have a question: Kagome returned to be human now that returned the youki to Sesshomaru?. I like the story, Update soon! |
Mad Wolf Woman chapter 8 . 10/17/2008 GOOD CHAPTER PLEASE UDATE SOON |