Reviews for March to Victory
highlander348 chapter 2 . 10/5/2019
Sucks ASS!
BrentNewland chapter 2 . 7/30/2019
I would think he or Cortana would take the super advanced forerunner armor with them.
ironspike68 chapter 4 . 5/14/2018
Very interesting story that I hope to see finished at some point, or maybe as a sequel.

Spike
highlander348 chapter 4 . 11/28/2017
Are you dead?
Paul chapter 4 . 11/21/2015
Please finish. This is an excellent story!
MattKennedy chapter 4 . 4/20/2015
Cool story! :) Master Chief gets to take out a Hive! Hope you continue the story sometime!
Guest chapter 4 . 4/10/2015
Really wish this story was still active
Arthorius chapter 4 . 1/11/2015
Interesting fic, unfortuantly since year is 2015 this fic appears to be dead/abandon.
dragonman11 chapter 4 . 12/22/2014
Good story please update
ME chapter 4 . 12/4/2014
Best chapter on a fanfick ever do number five before any judgment can be made.
Jigoku no Yami chapter 4 . 8/31/2014
DAMN IT, WHY!?
why did you have to end. This was amazing!
EffervescentNova chapter 4 . 7/21/2014
Just noticed the date on the last update for this. So ignore the previous review detailing the problems with this story's forerunners.
EffervescentNova chapter 2 . 7/21/2014
The Master Chief is 3 meters tall, the entry room to the AI facility would've been tiny for its purpose. You can't really be suggesting that a simple software patch is what Cortana needed to correct her failing system indefinitely. Producing a forerunner crystal core, yes, software patch, no.

The forerunners used zero-point energy, destroying proto universes and drawing power from that. They also stored this energy in various ways for use in portable equipment. Miniature suns captured inside a rifle? More trouble than its worth for obvious reasons, if you can even sustain a sun at that tiny of a mass.

The forerunners weren't human, and were not allies of ancient humanity.
FlowerofApril chapter 4 . 2/25/2014
Amazing story? Please don't let it become one of the amazing and abandoned stories. Please?
Xanthia Sorel chapter 4 . 12/26/2013
This a very enjoyable story with an interesting crossovers and I look forward to what happens next and how first contact with each other will play out.
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