I really liked your twist on this. I think it's certainly more fitting to their characters. You should polish this up a little, do a few corrections to spelling and grammar- but other than that, you have a potentially award winning one shot. I'd also say that Auron is a tad more attentive in his duties however, but I get the need to create a sense of urgency. I'd like to see this updated!

Heh, drunk Auron and responsible Rikku. Excellent role-reversal, and you even managed to keep them in char! _

This is quite nice, you have Auron and Rikku in nice characters and moods, but there are a few run-together words and spelling errors 'stuper' is 'stupor' off the top of my head, and there are a couple of others.

This is a good story!

I enjoyed it, but I'd suggest you get an editor. There were alot of spelling mistakes, and it'd be best if you read over your story and edited it yourself, or got someone else to do it!

A great story anywho, I really enjoyed the bit about "I'd rather burn than fade away". Got me thinking, unlike super-drunk Auron!

Good job! Hope to see more!

Adios!

I like this. And I really like the twist you made. You are right though, most do write about Rikku feeling unworthy. (myself included) But a fic like this really makes one think. I'm adding this one to my faves! Gin~

love it :)