So when are you acutally going to update this. Because this is a very good story and it should be updated again. And honestly if you're not going to do anything with it then you should just delete it.

When will he realize that Bumble's was the only person who wanted at the Dursley's. Is he that stupid?

Rule for dueling is balance. Learn how to move smoothly to any position and how to fall

Is he still blocked? Did he collect the horcrux? He has things to do

This one is really great! I hope you come back and finish it one day.

"Harry was always going to be Dumbledore's man."
And this displays nicely just how truly and utterly pathetic Harry is.

I hope you'll eventually revisit this story, i know it's been 3 years since you updated your account and 6 since you updated the story but it is an enjoyable story that I hope you'll eventually continue.

Please continue this story!

Lmfao

Holy fuck.

You are a fucking idiot. Thank you for abandoning this story.

Now all you need to do is delete it. Get this fucking trash out of here.

Bombarda is an exploding curse. Not a banishing charm.

I'm guessing the guy you adopted this story from abandoned his attempt, because your poor attempts at beta-ing couldn't cover up their poor attempts at using commas?

Just like you?

It's no wonder you abandoned this fic. This is trash lmao

Well, that's a bloody dumb chapter. Come on author. You can do better than that.

This was very well written. Thank you for taking the time to share it with us.

("I look at you, you look at me, I raise my right, you raise your left. What is this object?" to which the answer was, "Yourself in a mirror.")

Technically incorrect, it's a reflection :)