Story is great,but would you please finish has been 2 years since this fanic.

Pleaze continue pliz would. much love

Somebody is getting the shit kicked out of them

Ill beat the loving fuck out of whoever wrote this so that she doesn't tell him to the end bet your ass on it I shit you not there will be vengeance

dude please continue this i need to know what happens

when will the come

No she's not at all !:-( :'(

I HATE kana !

Omg her baby is gonna die

I bet she really is nervous about it

That was awesome

What a wonderful story. I hope you do continue it.

WHENNNNNNNNN?! WHEN SHALL I WITNESS THE BIRTH OF MY BELOVED THIRD DAUGHTERS'S- wait what?
Yo...um never mind what just happened, my Ishinness kicked in...so back to the question, when are you returning from the quest we know as life, to your home here? COMEBACKINEEDTHISSTORYDONE!
Bonus if you understood that last part.
Ja ne!

The chapter's ending was rather sweet. I liked it.

In the first part of this chapter, you used 'made his way' several times. Try to change it up a bit. I know it can be hard to think of another way to describe things, but try your best.

Ahem! Who is going to tell Byakuya about Rukia's... situation? Also, please add Hollow Ichigo and some familiar faces from the Soul Society. Pretty please? :)