That was stupid

The story is still great...please update

Continue please

Dude nice story! It's one of the best I've read in a while. I really wish you would update again, it's been waaaay too long. If you need any help I'll do whatever I can to help you and this epic story. I've seen too many fics die because the author hasn't updated.

amazing! you are very talented, and you should write more...please i am begging you i need a decent story to finish, all the others i have read within the last 5 hours were gawd awful! hurry please.

i think you did a great job with ur first adult scene, i have just one piece of advice, try not to use so much diverse language in describing the act itself, like stick to a single word to refer to, for the sake of the immature, her genitalia, and his as well. dont skip around from one to another and another but overall very vivid picture painted, you did a great job. keep on keepin on, Masters out!

i must say im very intrigued with this story i looking forward to the newest chapter ur doing very good _

Finally! Thank you for updating and can't wait for more. And I'll send you more whenever I can.

I offically dub this my favorite Renamon story.

This story is getting good, You get a 10 on the story scale! Keep going

About time you post a new chapter. Good job w/ this one, can't wait for the next one. BTW, I am writing a sequel to A Second Chance.

and thank you for updating. a nice new chapter, if a bit delayed. 13/10.

It's been more than a few days. update soon please. interesting plot & oc. 14/10. faved & alerted.

This is an awsome story you've given vivi a very definete personality and the story itself is exciting. And if you don't mind my saying about that personl part off yours in the story about the darkness what happened to you. You don't have to ansewr I'm just curious. Anyway great story love to read more!

It's getting better and better. Looking forward to more.