This was an interesting story. I truly enjoyed reading it. My only problem was that it was extremely AU-ish. I had no clue when in the Naruto universe timeline this was going on. So much was changed and not enough info was given to help the reader understand the changes. For the first several chapters i thought they were all 13 or something.

Still, interesting read and concept.

YOU DECEIVER GRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!

Why not a dress or a Kimono?

Does she like Shikamaru too or something?

" I like this song too, it reminds me of what you and Naruto SHOULD BE". That had me dying laughing. Good job on the stroy. Yatta!

i hope Ino reverts back to her normal self

I like your story but there are some spelling errors in chap 3

Too much spelling mistake

Yay happy ending! :D

Interesting story never would have guessed this was a Simi-Possession/love/drama story but what the hey it wasn't half bad if I do say so myself.

P.S. Naruto and Ino is my favorite pair for fanfictions

review time.

1. are you ever going to go back over this and proofread it? For example, your use of "me" is woefully inadequate...

"And because me and Naruto are now a couple"

should be

"And because Naruto and I are now a couple"

the reason?

A general rule of thumb to use when you're deciding when to use the "I" or "me" is to split each one into two seperate sentences. It the grammar correct?

"And because Naruto is now a couple"
"And Because me are now a couple."

nope.

"Because Naruto is now a couple."
"Because I am now a couple."

Huzzah!

Also you're missing a lot of commas and semicolons.

Dope story!

I do not want to sound mean, but can you please clarify your sentences it seems like you change your thought process in the middle of them. It's really annoying to try to find out what you mean as a reader. Also I suggest spell check it helps out a lot.

i love this story i always kinda liked ino

You leave out a lot of words. It's still understandable, just annoying to read.