| Reviews for Forgotten Tomorrows |
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Belles-lettres29 chapter 1 . 9/25/2011 that was awesome! you should definitely continue |
LoveLoverGrl chapter 1 . 2/2/2011 it was nice though they were in touch as its said in the next movie but u dint watch it then and maybe not now still but oh well! |
xxZZBABEY18xx chapter 1 . 3/13/2010 i know you wrote this a long time ago. but this story gave me butterflies bhaah. i mean if you believe that or not. yes it was cute and i did love it. but i believe it, and i wish i had it in visual version but reading will have to do. you did a great job on this. |
amutoxtakari chapter 1 . 1/6/2009 hey i love it! its not a one-shot right? hope no see ya |
Lady Zephyrs chapter 1 . 10/31/2008 I would've just reviewed a- "I love it and keep it up" but seeing as you'd like a more descriptive one, I'll go all the way. To start it off, I think that the beginning could have had more impact; like, Mitchie doing something else that might have been relevant to what she feels. However, I think that the way you wrote the story and how you connected the whole piece is simply astounding. I couldn't imagine the conversations being different (except in the beginning) and I thought that everything fit. The way you wrote it made me imagine and feel I was right there with them which for me is a bit rare. The ending made me go "aw" and it made me wish for relationships like this. If one would ask me to rate this story, I'd give it an 9.5/10 simply because it is absolutely amazing, but then again- all your Shane/Mitchie and Nate/Caitlyn are. (I only say these two because they're the only couplings I like. ) |
fdksn chapter 1 . 8/17/2008 aw, Shane and Mitchie are so cute together! Really well written and I liked it a lot! |
ransom-spunk chapter 1 . 8/12/2008 that was really good! can u plz write some more? :) |
Dazzle Me Again chapter 1 . 7/30/2008 One of the best stories I've read. It's really cute that Mitchie was wearing the jacket even when it was so hot outside. And I loved the "Think about right now" part. You are a very talented writer :) |
LittleRedOne chapter 1 . 7/25/2008 You might not be sur eyou like it, but I do! He gave her his "trademark" jacket! How cute! :) Lovely writing! Kelly |
L.Lockheart chapter 1 . 7/20/2008 Exquisite. really, that's all I have to say. :) |
Admiral Lily chapter 1 . 7/16/2008 Favorite line: "I think Tess even misses you" Second favorite line: "Long term borrow." And it's so very refreshing to finally find writers in the Camp Rock category that can actually write. Thank you. |
heavy.sighs.and.sad.goodbyes chapter 1 . 7/2/2008 it was sweet. it was fabulous. it was...indescribable. it was that good. |
brucas224 chapter 1 . 6/29/2008 love it more more shane and mitchie love and the boys and caitlyn love it update soon! |
mackrayereads chapter 1 . 6/28/2008 seriously grl u REALLY need 2 make sequels 4 some of these stories! |
EstelPax chapter 1 . 6/28/2008 I think that describes what everyone who falls in goes through. I really enjoyed how you came up with other piarings for Nate and Jason. Starz |