Hm...

Now, you piece got me thinking for quite a while... It is like one of those pieces you are often assigned to read at school... At first, you may find it to be pointless, BUT afterwards, whatever you do, you just can't disregard the mystery it has left in your mind. And you think. And you think some more...

This piece got me thinking and pondering...

If you analyze it, I'd say that their relationship is much like the fish swimming back and forth inside the aquarium... It is only natural... Yet, because it is so natural, it is everlasting.

Was it to your intentions in making it so deep? If it was, then you've definitely succeeded!

GOOD JOB!

This story is really nice, i really really liked it. the part about the swimming thing, the fish swiming part's good.

Good job on Oishi's thoughts, especially how he compared his life to the fish. I also liked how you kept the lover a secret, then revealed it to be Captain Tezuka at the end. I guess this takes place in the future.