Actually with the orders towards the Auror's part, Harry can bring charges against the British Ministry of Magic in the ICW for attempted murder and other things as well.

Hell id love to read a fic where Harry was abandoned by the Dursleys gets raised by a lawyer couple and he ends up Suing the fuck out of Hogwarts and the M.O.M. for attempted murder and assault by professors every year, 3 counts of attempted murder by ministry personnel aka dementors, Hogwarts/MoM/Tournament fund for fourth year, the MoM for attempted political assassination for the dementor attack.

Both Dumbledore and Moody can and SHOULD be charged with attempted murder, assault, and other things within the ICW anf Harry should sue the FUCK out of them.

I would of told the minister "if my fiance is harmed in anyway her then you minister will be dragged before the ICW with a massive law suit against magical Britain for many charges, also did you not know who my fiance father is and that we visiting french citizens were defending ourselves, muggles, and citzens from other country's from British wizards that your ministry failed to prosecute? You do know what the backlash will be from the ICW and international community will be."

I don't know what possessed me to read an incomplete story that hasn't been updated in forever.

Well now I feel silly. That's what I get for reviewing before the end of the story. You've explained a lot.

I was really enjoying this until it said his age. I married a genius who may have had an understanding of politics at the age of ten but I'm talking serious genius who was a military brat so he'd have some reference. Between your Harry stating that about Delecour and the rest of his internal monologue, also, show me a ten year old using the word monologue, this is hard to buy. Especially if your going with Canon pre Hogwarts because Harry had no life outside of Dursleys and school where he was bullied into submission. I love your writing style but you lose big points when your main character acts like a teenager at the minimum and you're saying he's nine or ten. Also, magic would allow for virtually instant identification at any Gringotts branch if nothing else so I'm worried for what's coming next.

IDK, I mean him being in it makes sense, but he has never written his name down as Harry Potter, so moody could never rip off a piece of his Hw that he did. Might have been better to just have Jeans name come out w/o fleur

Errmm...she grabbed him by the ...balls?

Fantastic story, I can only hope that you continue it at some point.

Really good so far
Are you going to continue
Looking forward to it if you are

Maybe Bumblebore didn't put Harry's name in the cup but that doesn't mean he won't be extremely happy to have him back under his control at long last. It WAS his idea tpo place Harry with abusive muggles and never check to see how he was being treated. It WAS also he who made damn sure no one but those loyal to himself knew where he placed Harry. So of course he's going to be extremely happy that Harry has turned up! Though, he won't be at all happy that Harry is so knowledgeable and powerfully magical. It makes him so much harder to convince to go die for the greater good.

Its a real shame that you haven't updated this because its brilliant

A wonderful story, kind of sad that its not finished.

like this

I thought the starting point for the story was quite interesting and it had a lot of potential, but ultimately the decision to age Harry permanently, have him rush through school and yet still end up in the triwiz tournament and the forceful lurch back into canon territory took the wind out of your sails. Leaving Harry "a leetle boy" for much longer would have kept up a lot of tension in the relationship without it sliding so fast into as good as married territory and everything else could easily have drawn power from that dynamic element... The adult knowledge Harry seemingly inherited after his near lethal beating and apparating to safety could also have made a great plot point, had you not ignored it except to make him an boringly extraordinary student close to prodigee status... where did it come from, how did he end up with it what can it help him to do (will it make him stronger than Voldemort?)

Likewise the talent to "feel" magic could also have carried the story much on its own. But it also was just a means to get him faster into Fleur's knickers and then was let fallen because it turned unimportant. Next to everything that distinguished this Jean Dupont from Harry Potter has fallen aside to return him to champion status and destroy his disguise which leaves the question: why bother with it at all and not just write "jean" as a french raised Harry?

I think should you ever think about doing a rewrite of this pretty intriguing story beginning you should shove back the romance part of it into the background only occasionally flashing up when they have another point in their travel where they make real advancements and lean heavily on the three outstanding marks of the story... the magic sense, the adult knowledge and how being raised differently and not having the memories of Harry Potter would change the bahavior and character of "Jean"... I'm convinced that would carry lot farther than just having him shag Fleur as soon as possible.

Oh and after the stunt with the blood magic Dumbledore should be toast. Jules Delacour was described as pretty influential in his country and Jean declaring his love for France should also have a lot of sway with the masses... so the kidnapping and illegal binding of a not volunteer into a dangerous and immoral tournament should be scandal enough to get him kicked from here to next year and thrown out of Hogwarts faster than the old chessmaster could utter "for the greater good"

On a related but different note... I liked the idea that Luna and Hermione find strong friendship if not even more with each other. It just felt a bit forced to have Hermione "jump" classes. Maybe it woudl be a better explanation to have her sit a couple of OWLs at the end of third year to evade the threat of being sent back into the muggle world after expulsion and having her memories removed... as far as we know a single OWL is your get out of jail free card for those purposes, possibly even including the right to use magic like an adult wherever it does nto endanger the statute of secrecy... She would most likely stay for NEWT studies, but now she can also decide to leave whenever it strikes her fancies, no punishment like losing every memory of magic and still carrying around a big target painted on her back would follow... The protectiveness towards Luna could mean she helps the younger girl too to prepare for some OWLs to gain the same status and freedom. Basically the effect is the same as with your "jumping classes" but it feels a lot more like old, dusty Hogwarts and not your average US high school ;) It would also IMO take into consideration how the scar and the terror of standing alone in front of a troll might have changed her personality... standing alone would have become second nature and taking such defensive measures to get one over the bigots and be safe from the randomness of ministerial decrees would easily fit with such an experience.