Very powerful

How'd Maddie die? Also this is a good story but sad.

Awesome. Catch ya on the flip side.

This is so sad, but it is written wonderfully. I do have to wonder what the others would do when they found out that Nick had struck Daggeron down, but I gues I'll leave that up to my imagination. Loved it! :)

update soon

wow! this story was so sad... but its great nonetheless!

Dark & edgy, unlike the Oliver stories. But I kinda like the fact Bowen's flipping out over Madison's death. Weird, I know. But does he have to beat up Daggeron? He can't be that whacked out over Maddie's death, can he?

LOVED IT!Good,sad story.:)

Very good logic there. I loved how angsty it was. Perfectly done!

I agree completely, great story, haunting but great

wait so maddie didnt die? im lost

Dark, very dark! i hope this is different from the other one-shots that connect to your other stories. btw for another holiday story could you do a bit of a remembrance day for old Zordon?

You're certainly in an evil mood today, that was sad and scary at the same time; what happend to the humorous author that I know so well?

I've been thinking, why don't you incorporate that story with Trent related to Tommy's clone witht the next Oliver Family Fic?