Here's some advice. If you're going to copy scenes be sire to change the characters to match your story. There were a few times where you call the characters Kagome and Sesshoumaru instead of Haji and Saya.

you copied your story from inuyasha's page,but you forgot to changes the names. it's becomes confusing for the reader, please next time you co-past your story, check the name of the characters first. thank you

So You stole this chapter from someone else obviously? At the beginning of the chapter is says Sesshomaru, come on now, if you steal work at least do it right.

on the last line it should be

Kia eventfully was able to move with promise not to attack Diva NOT;

Kia eventfully was able to move with promise don't to attack Diva.

you forget soo meny words that i cant read it BUT good story other wise fix your spelling and your story will be gr8

cool story and long lemon in Ch.25 but you called Saya kagome still cool

cool chapter but you got there name wrong in the lemon on chapter 18 but still cool

you most hate kai .you turn him into a prick and he is get punched almost every chapter.

Carl take order from Saya and not trying to kill on sight is kind of out of character .i could see him work together to kill Amshell do to his hatred for him but carl is unstable as Joker if not more and James would only take orders from Diva.

Diva in school it sound like a resepy for destaster And how you betray Diva it seem like get laid and become a Mother has Melode and remove some of the crazy in her .

Salker Amshell this is new adds a whole new level of creep to him.

hahahaha :D your getting your anime mixed up inuyasha has nothing to do with blood

Lov it

ummm not to be rude or anything the story was veryyyyy good but when i got here some of it was like chapter 18 well the lemon part only without the misuesed names of Inyusha and Kagome. U R A VERY GOOD WRITER UR THE ONLY BLOOD WRITER I READ FROM SO FAR XD

i'm sure the story must be nice but it has way too many grammar mistakes in it so it's confusing and unreadable