I like this. You can put Tiva almost anywhere these days.

Very amusing! McGee's naiveté is endearing, his readers are much more adept at understanding social interactions than he is

... Unless that whole Tiva things is just wistful thinking on fans' part, but no, he said he cannot live without her, that's not platonic friendship stuff...

So anyway, reading your fic was fun. I like the idea of McGee being confronted to his readers; and thinking about how he'll react at Tony and Ziva's flirting now that he knows what it means... Now that is bound to be fun too

love it, though in DEEP SIX the first of McGee's books, Tommy and Lisa get together

ZARA AND TED ROFLMAO

This was awesome. And totally true - McGee writes about them, he should notice how they act!

XD Great job!

Great, interesting, in character, and well written chapt!

Timothy L. McGee. It works.

I liked this a lot. It was cute/funny/smart.

Thanks.

I did enjoy it, very much!

Tim is much more observant than he thinks he is!

Quite a nice bit!