Kim saying to ron i don t mind having sex with but next time wait till we are home ok

that got her motor going, great job

Good 1 shot

A great story, Sebastian! It has a great premise and a great execution.

I only noticed one mistake.

"Ron sprung into motion and ran along the ashen hallway dug into the bowels a volcano"

You probably meant "of a volcano."

But otherwise the one-shot was well-written and you could understand why Ron would be so frustrated at Kim.

My favorite part was where Ron was admitting he was wrong, as his father had told him good guys do lol.

OOOOOOO! I want an Omnipick! An RPG character of mine once had a Skeleton Key that would unlock any mechanical (and many magical) locks, but had the tiresome side effect of attracting the attention of any undead within a mile.

Oh, Kim, you naughty, naughty thing, you! Ron, I am quite sure, is in for the time of his life ... thus far.

As a side note, your grammar and punctuation appear to be flawless. I didn't catch one mistake. Kudos.

Lol that was great! Very amusing. Where's the rest? Bahaha don't mind me, just being a perv.

Umm...oh wow. Very much a...moment in their relationship. :)

this is so cute and sexy

A

LMAO. A little twisted, and I don't think Ron would ever in a million years dare do such a thing, but it was certainly a amusing little read.

kinky.

SS,

I loved your story thanks for putting an interesting point of view to the subject of teasing. I hate to be teased but I'm a terrible tease. Thanks for a great read.

Thanks,

SS

XD Oh, Kim, you're SO evil! Bwahaha! I guess Kim has a thing for bondage? That she didn't realize until Ron did that. The thrill of saving the world from evil villains takes on a whole new meaning. But this might lead to problems about getting excited at the WORST time.

Dementor: Und NOW zat you und ze sidekeek are FIRMLY SECURED by ze MANACLES, I vill...vait, vat iz wrong vith...VAT in ze VORLD?

Oh, boy, indeed. he he he xD

Ahaha, wow, that was hilarious! xD Great job!

(:

Angelica

If Kim's folks return home unexpectedly, Ron will be on his way to a Black Hole, PDQ! At the same time, I wonder. Unless he cuts them off, Ron can't get Kim's clothes completely off as long as her arms and legs are tied that way. Well, a lot of "touchy-feely" will make both of them happy, and let both Ron & Kim understand themselves better.

A nice mixture of silliness, sex and common sense. All in all, a fun piece, sir!

LTAOZFAN

"Them's my views, amen, so be it."

"Treasure Island," by R. L. Stevenson