"He never thought with his heart..." that part is fantastic and written so well.
You're a great author,really,thank you for sharing your words!

This was beautifully written...
I can feel his pain...
Thanks

Hi! I just wanted to compliment you on your first fic, and it's a doozy! You write beautifully, and I've been a fan of fics that delve more into the psychological and symbolic realm depending on the type of fic one's writing. Congrats, and I hope you stick around to write more! Beautiful job!

This was great! I can't believe it's the first thing you've written. Great job.

This is great! Your a wonderful writer with captivating emotions depicted throughout this story. I read it so fast that I went back and re-read it just in case I missed something! You should think about writing another.