| Reviews for Avatar : Book One : Air |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2015 should make book 2 |
| dr-fanmai-lover chapter 1 . 4/8/2012 palse gave some-love-here maby-booine-cood-thop or monquie-avater-legend-korra |
 Juicedmark chapter 1 . 7/23/2011 how don't know how much more of this i can take. You start these amazing stories but then just stop. hope you go over some of your older work and start them up again. |
| Cosmos Angel and Yami Darkness chapter 1 . 9/19/2010 keep going |
| wolfey141 chapter 1 . 4/15/2010 Hey I love a lot of your stories but when are you going to update them? |
| Kaiba1288 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010 This is an awesome story you are a very good writer, Good luck with this & any others you may write. Looking forward to reading the rest of the story. Peace & Jah Bless Kaiba1288 |
| dr-fanmai-lover chapter 1 . 9/28/2009 bervo why-does-booine-aillway-raw-dael-in-caeroosover it-be if booine-earth-bander-or-fir-bander |
| Cylon One chapter 1 . 3/6/2009 A very cool starting chapter. Ron's the Avatar. Avatar Ron. Must see more. |
| Isamaru chapter 1 . 2/10/2009 Awesome story, though a little on the, I suppose monologing would be the proper term. Not to say it isn't good, It just seems that some of the diolouge is a little forced. Well anyway, good story, can't wait for the next chapter. Ja Ne. |
| nr 25 peter chapter 1 . 1/19/2009 Good first Chapter, can't wait to see more.:) |
| Donteatacowman chapter 1 . 10/17/2008 Le gaspe! Why hasn't this been continued as promised! Wonderful, if Ron/Tara, beginning here... Please, PLEASE finish this! It's too great to sit on FF Net until it becomes obsolete! |
| Warlord-Xana chapter 1 . 8/18/2008 awesome story (and thank you for the pairing), can you have Brick or Yori be the Earthbenders of the past cause that would be cool. |
| Diaconsecond chapter 1 . 7/29/2008 Excellent fic and execution I am waiting for an update |
| sr-fanmai-lover chapter 1 . 5/7/2008 bervo the-water-naion-haets-the-firnaion it-cool-if-booine-beacme-eairthbander cood-ron-really-the-avter-the-oragin-told-bey katera-in-any-any-epsd-of-avter |
| MR. SE7EN chapter 1 . 4/29/2008 DUDE AWESOME! TO THE MAX! KEEP GOING! oh and on your other kp story too |
