| Reviews for Hermione's Crush |
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  carly chapter 1 . 6/22/2015 i like it |
 GallagherGirl537 chapter 31 . 1/6/2011 this was very god. i loved it |
| Ms.Reinvented chapter 31 . 11/10/2007 LUV ur story! cant wait 4 da next chappie! wat happened to ginny? |
| Sword'sfunPen'sbetter8P chapter 1 . 8/18/2007 g |
| Runhard chapter 1 . 3/17/2007 Hey, loved the story (although I'm only just reading it now, even though it was published 5-6 years ago 0). I hope you keep writing. -Dan |
| Angela chapter 1 . 6/26/2005 After reading this whole story (besides the sequel, which i have yet to get to) i wanted to tell you how nice that plot of yours is;) i loved it! |
| GimmeMoreMANGA chapter 1 . 6/4/2005 Wow... did they do what i think they did? oh my god! |
| Austin chapter 12 . 2/17/2005 Unfortunatly, Sirius died in the 5th book. But, I realize that this chapter was written 2 or 3 years ago. Anyway keep up the good work! |
| Faerie of Serendipity chapter 22 . 11/25/2004 I heart this story! btw, though (lol) as far as I know, British people don't say yall, do they? |
| Lizzy-Ann-15 chapter 1 . 8/3/2004 How long? |
| EGRockerChic chapter 31 . 7/24/2004 GREAT STORY! I found it on HP Romance A |
| alienyouthct chapter 6 . 5/12/2004 I kept reading, thinking that maybe if I stuck it out, your English would get better. Sadly, no such luck. Try enrolling in an eighth grade English course, then take another crack at this. |
| udderpd chapter 20 . 4/1/2004 If you spent more time writing the story instead of answering your reviewers we would have a lot more story |
| udderpd chapter 1 . 4/1/2004 A very nice start Comment: you should not say "it was 6am in the morning" 6am has to be in the morning. Best to say "it was six (o'clock) in the morning" the bracket being optional. I hope that this is helpful Bye |
| Field-99 chapter 11 . 3/15/2004 I agree with Insomniac. How the hell did you get 700 reviews? Maybe you don't come from this country, but there are so many grammatical errors in this that I seriously had to read the sentence four or five times before I realized that it DIDN'T MAKE ANY SENSE. People who give this story good reviews clearly don't know how to read a proper fanfic. What the hell is with all the exclamation marks? Do you know that people do shout between each other when speaking? You don't have any of the characters captured; and when I say none of the characters I MEAN no one. You remind me of the author pablo, his story got 500 reviews and it was just as bad if not worse than this. What the hell is up with the story? Harry and Lavender get mad at each other for some reason, Harry doesn't like her anymore. Lavender goes out with Ron to make Harry jealous, then captures him? From what I read on Insomniacs review, the story looks like it gets worse and worse. I stopped after you couldn't put together a sentance in past tense. Excuse me for being rude but... If english isn't your first language, and judging by the quality of this fic it isn't, THEN STOP WRITING IN ENGLISH BECUASE I CAN'T UNDERSTAND THIS PIECE OF SH*. 700 REVIEWS? You people DISGUST me. I am an H/Hr fan and even I couldn't STAND this. |
