I have read your story several times before I now had time to write a review. When I liked this pairring before, I love it now. You have created such an amazing story, not only with this part but also the following parts. I enjoyed the hours spending in your light-universe :-)

Aww, cute and sweet.

Oh my goshness...this is b-e-a-utiful...two thumbs up!

Owl City wrote a song called Rainbow Veins that makes me think of this story. The lyrics seem perfect for Jazz, especially during the rainstorm and again when he is talking to Prowl about light and color. The instruments at the beginning even remind me of the sound of wooden wind chimes. If you haven't heard it before, I strongly recommend that you look it up.
Wonderful work.

So beautifully written... Prowl's blindness is just one of those added particularity that makes him all the more special. Animated Prowl has always been my favorite. As ever, I love your writting! It enlightens my days!

On that case, i have a question: If Prowl's visor used waves, has he ever seen a reflection?
Not just the water, but the image of a reflection?

Such love & friendship from this . . . :'D

daw! eehh! *switches between AW! ing and EEH! ing*

I love this! :D

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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! That was beautiful! I really enjoyed reading this.

nice

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Lovely. I like how you incorporated Circuit-Su beginning as lovemaking positions and then evolving into a fighting stance. (I will never practice martial arts the same.) I love Jazz's blunt 'I love you.' I literally said out loud in the middle of my library, 'Well damn, Jazz, don't hesitate...'

You are an excellent writer and I love this..."series" I suppose you could call it. Keep writing, darling. It would be as waste if you didn't. ;)

*Speechless* I... I... think I'm in love...

With your story, that is, so please don't be creeped out! xD In my opinion, this is the mother of all Prowl/Jazz fics, even though there are so many good ones out there!

*Can't come up with suitable words for this story, must regain mind first* xD

THIS is what a TFA Jazz/Prowl should be. I've never been able to find it until now. Thank you for writing it. Smooth and decadent as Jazz's voice, rich with description without ever dragging down the plot's momentum - you hit the perfect balance. (Perfect balance that two ninjas need to have kama sutra sex in a tree, apparently.)

You do beautiful, beautiful work. A must-fav.

QOTRS~