OOO...very nice. Great use of tension, and very decsriptive. Well Done!

I probably should not be reading love stories when I feel so depressed, but this one was a nice one.. it wasnt filled with to much love. made me more happy to know she was going to die and was ready for it. Ah hell I am just rambling :-)

*sniff* This was so BEAUTIFUL! "I know he'll always be there to protect and save me from eternal darkness" *wails* Christian is such a sweetie!

'He places his forehead against mine, trying to cool it. Trying to take the fever from my head' *sniffle*

Oh... oh... That was beautiful. Beautiful. *sigh*

Damn. That was a good story. keep up the good work. 'specially like the fact that Satine is tired all the time cuz of Consumstion, and then she lets Christian see her tired, and she falls asleep in his arms.

This was really good...poor Satine :( I liked it...I hope you write some more Moulin Rouge fics in the future! Buh bye :)

I do't quite know whether I should be happy or sad...nice nice nice ficcer. :)