Reviews for The First
Crystalzap chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
lol poor Piccolo, Gohan always did have him wrapped around his little finger lol ;P

Btw Gohan was only 7-9 during that time period, but I understand if you wanted him older for the story
Rohan777 chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
I can't believe, that in the 4 years time this has been online, I haven't stumbled on this story before. I read through it now and instantly fav-ed it. _ Gohan and Piccolo are my favorite people in the DBZ universe. Excellent read.
scarves-and-jumpers chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
Actually, i thought that Piccolo was only 4 years older than Gohan. His body and mind are more mature, but he's still pretty close to him in age. loved it anyways, absolutely adorable!
Suicide In A Bottle chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
A child's innocent questions can be quite...trouble sum can't they?
crazysmile15 chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
OMG! THIS WAS THE GREATEST! XD
AnArmyBoysCowGirl chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
This story is sooooo super amazing! I love it! I love how gohan his so cute and exploring and innocent...and he has piccolo wraped around his finger but piccolos still tough and cool and still himself...i like fluffy stories to but i reallllllyyyyyy love stories like this where piccolos still himself :)

it was sooooooo greattt! prettyyyyy pretttyyy pretttyyyyy pleaseeeeeeee another chapter or something!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
That was amazing! That was a super amazing chapter! It was cute how gohan's exploreing and he was so innocent and everything ...and how piccolo was like wraped around his finger but piccolo's still like tough and cool... I dont mind fluffy storys but i realllyyyy love stories with piccolo still being himself

it was great! prettyyyy prettyy prettyyy pleaseeeeeeeeeee another chapter or something? O:)
h0use-m0use chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
.MORE.

K not only is your fanfic part of the 0.5% of DBZ fanfiction out there worth reading, but this pair is SO hard to get proper hold of. You have to do it carefully or you'll ruin it, but you just did it amazingly.

Kudos and please write another chapter...maybe further exploration...stuff...and ignore the fact that Gohan's 12? :D
Angelwarrior1 chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Wow! Talk about a hot first kiss! Well done! Poor Piccolo doesn't stand a chance when it comes to denying Gohan something.

Angelwarrior1
Teufelkind chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
If it were to take place, this is how I myself pictured it would happen haha

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Sable19 chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
This is an adorable story, and I love his reactions to his student's questions and request. xD Adding to my favorites!
Lily Carroll chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
I was long two days to write that revier for your fic.

The reason?

I didn't find words and forms to describe as I had loved your fic!

The simple and sincere descriptions. Cynic, sarcastic, sweets and soft.

Gohan innocent , cute and tempting.

Piccollo finding your temptation...

Your kiss scene...Wow!

Forgive me for that revier and for my bad English... and congratulations for the beautiful work and me awaits new fics of that shipper that I adore.

Kisses
WhiteP chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
Wowl, I loved this story! Sequel, please! ;)
FluffyBiscuits chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
I'm not a fan of Gohan/Piccolo yaoi but this was pretty funny. ChiChi is always making Gohan study and has always impressed on him that if something is in a book then it must be true. Kissing a hormonal twelve year old the worst thing Piccolo has ever done. He can just chalk it up to the list of crimes he comminted back when he was evil.
Velasa chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
I have to say I'm torn. This was well written, but somewhat disturbing in bad ways. But well written. If you have anything set three years later I'll be more than happy to read that and enjoy the work you put into it thoroughly.

All the same, that bit where Gohan used the logic that if it was in his mother's porn she must approve of it was hysterical.
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