It was a very good story, one of the best. Although it is late and I do not know if you will see it but I loved it. As I already said very good story.

the truth comes out.

both sisters are falling in love! at the same time!

oh. well that's unfortunate.

things are getting heated...

and byakuya shows up!

Ichigo seems like a very good kid. This story is so good! I just might have to comment on all of the chapters if they are all legendary like this one!

This is a disturbing story.

Ik im 9 years off but this is the best start off to a story ive seen

Did they really just let a FUCKING witness go? Without letting the authorities know? I know that getting authorities involved will be problematic BUT this is will make Aizen more cautious(maybe). Also, did they not think to search the address they were given? Or research who Kira is?

Keigo pisses me off. So does Noriko. I wonder if she had thought about the fact that all of this wouldn't happen if she had simply given up on Ichigo. If she's confident about herself and her body, then she shouldn't lower her pride to keep chasing after a guy who doesn't want her.

It can't only be me who's angry at the fact that both Ihigo and Rukia (mostly Rukia) made VEY STUDPID decisions? Like, I understand but Rukia, you can't be trusting of someone you've never met over someone you've known all your life.

That was one hell of a thrill ride! Thank you so much for this wonderful story :D

dood u write sooooooo much #can i be ure apprentice

Thank you for the wonderful story! Hoo! I am happy that it has become like this despite all those suspense.