Sad fic. Awesome writing. Poor Jordan. I hope Jordan gets free.

Wow... it was... I think powerful is the right word.

This was soo sad. It nearly made me cry. You make this really realistic. It's as if this had actually happened. Great Job on the poem.

WOW! my name is rachel jordan! i waz looking up myself on google... good story! those books rock!

oh no that was so sad and depressing! i liked the transitition at the end...so sad. great job.

::Rachel Maguire-Chasez::

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Good story.

Dude that was great. A poem/story and how you chaned it at the end from "big sister" to "little sister". Me likes. I give it a Supernarf.

Very powerful, love the way you repeated the first lines at the end. Incredible.

*sobs into her handkerchief* That was so depressing! Poor Jordan...poor Rachel...*stomps her foot on the ground* How come? HOW COME? *sighs* I guess it's just my rage at my sister now. I'm going to go give her a hug now *sniffles* Good story, Rb. Good story. Especially the poem.

It's a perfect picture of the evils of war, the way it destroys both the warriors and the victims. The two sentences about Sara are an extra nice touch. In Animorphs one reads a lot about kids being forced to grow up, but there's much too little about children suffering while they're still children and unaware of the invasion. I'd love to see you write a sequel on Sara.

Oh, that was great. Just Great! I loved the end, though it was soo sad.

::wipes the tears away from her eyes::

I think I already told you this, but it's great.

As I told ya before, very sweet! Luv it.

Wonderful! Of course, Jordan's in there, so of *course* it's cool... ;)