I can't believe I can't still forget this story after years. You made me very curious. And I just wanted to know how you will end it. Come on. Come back please.

rereading this is such a good story. You're the only one who convinced me that sometimes, Polygamy is not that bad. But of course, I'm still not a fan.

well then XD this was an interesting twist of events...especially since Nathan technically had sex with himself XD

This is really good so far I can't wait to read more please update soon

So close! Ahh, I wonder how the others would reacts to the doubles?

The way you make the story is good i just hate polygamy

Oh surely you have more of this story to come. My goodness, I have enjoyed this story so far.

This so exciting. Please update soon.

(Stefan... Stephan)

this far into the story and we're still not sure how his name is spelled?

- 18 years is a lot of years- naruto is now twice as old as sasuke_so not only is it not a male body- but it's also an old body_ as romantic as the notion that naruto is naruto, no matter what- it's not the same_ to go from having sex with a teen boy and suddenly it's a mature woman_ not even close to the same_

but it was still an emotional chapter- and it was good

(While Kyuubi might be different here, in Naruto's body, because of the lack of chakra, )

- how does he even know kyuubi is present and didn't just become nothing because he/it was made of chakra_ and if he believes that kyuubi survived- what does he think will happen when he and his child with whiskers pass through to konoha ? will kyuubi be present in naruto again- will his/her child have her own separate and unique demon- like kyuubi's kit_ that will be interesting to discover.

doesn't sasuke want to have sex with nathan and vice versa- sasuke is physically attracted to a male naruto- which nathan is_ and nathan is attracted to stefan- which sasuke is a younger version of_so that will also be interesting to read about.

hope there will be more to read

this kinda had an incestuous tone to it- also trying too hard to be dramatic and poetic- seeing 2 siblings behave/interact like this is kinda creepy

smart planning/plotting- and enjoyable and exciting to read_ i've reread the last couple of chaps and this story still affects me emotionally- even after years and multiple readings.

i hope to read more- it's such a fascinating and original story. if there is no more to come- know that i am grateful for what you have shared with us

Hmmm... I'm not so sure about this. I was looking for a good romance story, and I thought this one looked pretty interesting. However, It's almost taken on a gross nature because everyone's being crudely perverted to Naruto. As well, I think this is the only story I've ever skipped through a lemon before. It honestly made me uncomfortable because it was not at all what I was expecting... I think you should work on categorizing your Fanfics better from now on.

Wait... What? I'm up until 5 in the morning for this? I'm am not pleased... If the ultimate ending is the same... Tears shall be shed.

one baru us not a she