I hate to say that. Multiple crossover story is killing this fanfiction. Maybe if you completely revision it to pure Love Hina fanfiction. It's will be much better! Beside I was fan of nearly all anime and manga in this fanfiction. It's just don't mesh together well.

I'm delighted to see that this story has been updated, as I haven't logged in to this site for years, and I look forward to future updates!

Well each update seems to be one step closer to ,let's say, Keitaro gaining a bonus lover in Rei after reuniting with Naru.

honestly I this chapter was... satisfying. Good Job!

amazing and can wait for more~

Please no Kanako/ Naru... it's too out of nowhere... and too weird. I love yuri but I don't understand on why two girls who barely get along who all suddenly wanted to jumped on each other's bodies.

Well this is a surprise. I thought this fic was dead for years. I think I will reread this from the start to refresh my memory.

I'm very amaze this been a update of this! and can wait to see more and please don't let Kei love Naru back PLEASE

You can't just leave Naru's story ambiguous. That's not okay.

Nope. Fuck this crap.

Amazing story you've just wrote on there with Romace on it so please keep update the next chapter soon to see what happens.

man who would've thought Su was a freak lol

i love this story. I had to stop reading last night when my eyes hurt but i'm back into it. Though I wish Kit would reappear soon. Your dragging this out is killin me lol I want to know whether or not she is pregnant with Keitaro's baby. I really enjoyed this chapter as well I could just picture toss a hapless Naru through a fence and into the river lol. keep up the good work

uh oh kit

uh oh kit maybe pregnant. wow that should be interesting