O_o!

Is it SASU-RETARD?

OMG!

That's amazing!

Or maybe it's not.

I mean, the first person who comes ot mind with "red eyes" is, of course, Sasu-tard.

D:

So, I'll be waiting...I MISS TONTON!

WHERE COULD HE'VE GONE?

D:

Well, anyways, update soon! I wanna know what happens!

:]

Anyways, you probably wouldn't remember, but I'm butaneng (or butaNENG)...I WON ONE OF YOUR RAMEN AND ROMMATES THINGIES!

With the guessing game?

Or something.

About the picture?

Or something.

I'm not sure.

I can't remember.

Yes, if you remember, it's that litte, anoying pest loving your stories.

ahahaha.

:D

Yep, that's me.

I hope you remember.

:]

UPDATE SOON! PLEASE?

Ouch.

Dude, then what happened to Sasuke-teme?

Hehehe.

I knew Sakura and Naruto would be like connected.

THEY LOVEH EACHOTHER!

:D

Well, it really does suck for Sakura, like omg, she could always find another significant other, but we all know that's not eh easiest thing to do...

D:

Dude.

How'd he die?

Will I know in the next chapter?

:D?

Oh...

Suspense. D:

Next chapter! :]

i think you overdid it with the red eyes. the missing pig was good though, lol. nice touch of comedy to such a drab and depressing "prologue" as you termed it. good chapter though. it had all those elements you listed and then some.

not bad at all... dont like the aspect of Naruto dying though...

cool

hate the pairing... love the fic.

This is a oneshotright? Cause it doesn't say completed.

Wow, pretty depressing conveying very strong emotion of regret, loss and sadness.

Really good description though you might to reread your one-shot and check for minor spelling. Alos, if this is a one-shot, don't forget to set it to complete, authors always forget to do that.

Anyways, fairly well done and hope you write something with fluff in it.

Later.

Morbid, depressing and very well written. Great foreshadowing of the story! I love the metaphor you made with the rain.

*sobs* that was so sad! Good job! Keep up ur good work