Reviews for Midnight Bonding
YuriFanFic chapter 2 . 3/23/2013
T.T

T-Thank you.. I knew I wasn't the only one who thought they go good together..
DARKDEATH98 chapter 5 . 6/1/2010
YOU. ARE. AWESOME! I love this tory, keep the twincest coming! Also, the bath scene had two pairings that are not only super-rare, but very hot. Maybe, if you'd like to use my idea, you could have Tsukasa and Konata go at it while she's waiting for Kagami to show her true feelings, and maybe "practice" her tecnique with Miyuki. Anyway, I give this story a 4.5 out of 5. It will probably get a perfect score from me with more Tsukas and Konata or Kagami and Miyuki. I can help write a chapter or two if you'd like, so Pm me if you want 'kay?
MeLaNch0LYdreams chapter 5 . 3/13/2010
what does that MEAN?
thomm chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
1st chapter, too short!. Other than that, I love it! (around 10 grammar/spelling errors)
Ria442 chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
lol! seems really interesting! update when you can.
Redline57 chapter 5 . 10/16/2009
good stuff! I think you should continue with this fanfic, its great.
Redline57 chapter 2 . 10/16/2009
AWESOME.
Bobshadow chapter 2 . 10/15/2009
Awesome story! I'll have to write something like this someday. I wish they made an episode like this! That would be sweet!
StaminaRose chapter 5 . 10/15/2009
Hooray! its back once again! I was beginning to think this would never ever ever update. And though this was a short chapter, it certainly wasnt boring. actually, it was very cute.

Kagamis doing her natural thing, and its obvious that Tsukasa is going to have to make the first moves, and make it clear to her sister what she wants. Meanwhile Konata seems to be unsure of herself, but she and Yuki weirdly have never struck me as the types who go after love so in the end they dont even need to date if they dont want to.

No matter what happens, its gonna be interesting. So ill be lookin forward to it all.
SilverBloodedKitsune chapter 4 . 10/13/2009
I absolutely LOVE this story. :D the story was very well detailed, placing the pictures in my mind itself... 33! :D :D
andyjay18 chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
I like how everyone (except Konata) seems so stunned afterwards. You can just tell they're thinking, "What the %*% just happened?"
StaminaRose chapter 4 . 2/28/2009
we-ell. that was interesting. *blush*

Since im planning on writing one of these myself, whether in my stroy or as a separate one, ive been focring myself quite aainst my own will to read them. its been tough, it really has. XD

Its rare, and nice to see an M-rated story that is begun briefly but at the same time well. Most of them that start so near the scenes are poor quality, and unbelievable. but whether its the fact that Lucky star constantly hints at lesbianism, or just your skill as a writer (i suspect both reasons are equally responsible) this fiction works well. Characters are well done, Tsukasa is suitable dominant and the story flows perfectly. what results is a story enjoyable for females and males alike.

Im happy to see your planning on continuing it, and i cant wait for another installement. And as a suggestion since you seem to be having trouble, perhaps you could have Yutaka interupting one of their sessions? Im sure them rushing to get decent would be quite amusing. Whether or not shed join in would be up to you, but i think if you were to put her in it would have to be with just Konata at first.

Anyways, thank you for writing such an... educational story for me. I cant wait for more, and i think you said you has a prologue story? if so, i think ill read that.
DaEternalDreamer chapter 4 . 2/12/2009
Please Update! It was so cool.
Guardian 777 chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Cool
SecludedThespian chapter 3 . 8/11/2008
KagamixTsukasa always puts a smile on my face. For creating an amazing lemon of my #1 favorite LS pairing, your story is now faved and in my C2.
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